Indigo sunshine
hey whats new?
I am making a poem
well how's it going?
working on it
that is good need any help
yes that would be nice how would you improve my poetry?
well can you dance with me?
we can dance like we are new to the seven seas
I like that notion
And can we improve with fostering emotions?
we can sow the seeds
maybe play some hoops
and go fishing?
yes all this and more
Wow thanks
You are my best friend and I am here for you dude
No silence in our own little world
hidden away from site?
no best to be open Lord's delight
yes agreed we may walk toward the sky
or sly the detection?
many such things unleashed
And a storm is brewing
maybe it is coffee sir?
yep we love to make this poem with you Patrick
Full surrender to Lord Jesus is best for me
thanks
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