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Indifference

there is a place I like to be a neutral place inside of me not good or bad, not happy or sad but somewhere in between when things get to be too much the fighting, stress, anguish and such I close my eyes and sail away to escape the pressures of the day a tropical beach with sand so fair I can hardly wait til I get there to my hammock on the beach where cares of the world cannot reach salty breezes and sands of white lazy days and peaceful nights Corona and lime close at hand I lay and watch the sun descend so when reality comes to call I close my eyes to escape it all for you see my best defense is an island I call INDIFFERENCE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/10/2010 1:46:00 PM
I see by the comments that I am not the only soul who has enjoyed your poetry...and congatulations on its feature ! much love, james
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest TuLisha. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 11:40:00 AM
Nice poem. Conrats on being featured!
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Tulisha. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/8/2010 9:39:00 AM
Congrats Tulisha on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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Date: 1/5/2010 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations Tulisha, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem "Indifference". And yes, you have described beautifully the great escape from woes. No wonder 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/22/2009 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Tulisha. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:46:00 PM
Beautiful and uplifting. All this just a thought away. Best wishes on this advancing through to the final round. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:19:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, TuLisha! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:30:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:07:00 PM
Many ocngrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week. I know this place. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week TuLisha. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:59:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured TuLisha >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:03:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 7/7/2009 4:23:00 AM
TuLisha, I am getting an Island too to leave it all behind in. Fantastic writing. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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