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Indian Giver's Quick Fix

When the heart I gave wholly to you
was stomped on and then ripped in two,
I took it right back.
So hit the road, Jack!
I'll be good once I find Super Glue.


For P.D.'s Indian Giver Contest

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/30/2012 10:23:00 AM

wonderful poem this, i think this contest caused a few problems, anyhow i like this, and it also helps one draw a profile of you, (in a nice way) that no one mess'es around with AD, Gosh i've used a lot of that stuff, glue that is, harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 5:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Andrea. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2010 6:36:00 AM

Andrea, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 5:39:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. I really liked this first time around. Second read even more so. Eamon

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/26/2010 7:42:00 PM

Many congratulations dear Andrea for this super win. A very Happy New Year to you and your family.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/26/2010 6:51:00 PM

Hello Andrea, Just wanted to say congratulations on your win! Well done As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 4:59:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry luv... enjoy with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/26/2010 9:26:00 AM

Congratulation Andrea on your worthy poem's honored place. Love," I took it right back. So hit the road, Jack! Nice effect. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/26/2010 7:14:00 AM

humor at its finest… KUDOS to your special win in the contest, andrea... huggs, nette

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/26/2010 6:26:00 AM

Super glue this one to your fridge as well, Andrea. Congrats on a super winner. Dan C

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/26/2010 5:59:00 AM

Congrats my dear on your well deserved win!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2010 5:31:00 AM

Congratulations.Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 11:08:00 PM

ANDREA, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

John Freeman

Date: 12/11/2010 6:57:00 PM

Super Glue.ripped in two/wholly to you/right back. So hit the road, Jack! I'll be fine soon as I find the super glue. These are good lyrics Andrea. Good luck in the DP's inspiring contest,. Agape, Moses

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 12/11/2010 5:09:00 PM

Whoa, there's real anger here. Ray Charles, eh? Are you in the chorus shouting: " That's right!" Always good when I read your work. Always. Regards, Gerard.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 12/11/2010 2:35:00 PM

This is fantastic so funny just thinking about it makes me laugh.When"THE DOLL" won I was so happy neer really thought it would win,Thanks for those sweet comments.LUV Teresa

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/11/2010 9:45:00 AM

Yup that super glues good stuff! As long as you really want the stuff to stay stuck! Light & Love

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/11/2010 2:20:00 AM

Hi. Great write. Heart broken but what the hell, you are going to survive. The very best of luck in the contest. Thanks for your kind comment. No, I am not from India. Irish from my once red hair to the toes of my size 12 feet. Hope that I did not offend anyone with my writing. I dribble on not thinking. The wife says that when I write I go to another planet. Peace and happiness to you and yours. Eamon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/10/2010 4:39:00 PM

SOUP MAIL..Andrea and thankxxx...