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Indian Giver

Caresses on his back made him quiver. Enticingly, she said, “Love, come hither.” Warm fingers rubbed his spine. Her kisses felt so fine. An Indian princess was his giver. © December 10, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 12/27/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:50:00 AM
Dane Ann, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:02:00 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon
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Date: 12/26/2010 11:59:00 PM
A really passionate one this was. One of the finest in the contest! Congratulations, Dane ann. LUv, andrea
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:14:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too...
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:41:00 AM
Nice job Dane. Congratulations on a worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:39:00 AM
smiling big at this one, dane! CHEERS for bagging an award in PD’s contest!
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:37:00 AM
laughing out loud! CHEERS for bagging an award in PD’s contest, dane... huggs, nette
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Dane
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Date: 12/25/2010 11:19:00 PM
DANE, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.
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Date: 12/18/2010 3:16:00 PM
wow, this one is amazing. ONe of the BEST
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:41:00 AM
you must be going through a dry spell. well nothing you can do untill the spirit returns. i'll be praying for you. love john
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Date: 12/17/2010 1:33:00 PM
You have soup mail.
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Date: 12/16/2010 9:24:00 AM
you've got me dreamy. john h loving iii
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:32:00 AM
It's a really nice take on the Indian giver, Dane
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Date: 12/10/2010 8:14:00 PM
ahhh, you made the term indian giver a very kind one, dane ann, love it!
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Date: 12/10/2010 5:00:00 PM
Ah, a giver of love!! Nice take on the contest, dear friend. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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