Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Limerick

Indian Giver

Caresses on his back made him quiver.
Enticingly, she said, “Love, come hither.”
Warm fingers rubbed his spine.
Her kisses felt so fine.
An Indian princess was his giver.

© December 10, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 27, 2010 at 5:17 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

James Fraser December 27, 2010 at 6:50 AM Dane Ann, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin December 27, 2010 at 6:02 AM Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich December 26, 2010 at 11:59 PM A really passionate one this was. One of the finest in the contest! Congratulations, Dane ann. LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 26, 2010 at 5:14 PM Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too...

John Freeman December 26, 2010 at 10:41 AM Nice job Dane. Congratulations on a worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud December 26, 2010 at 7:39 AM smiling big at this one, dane! CHEERS for bagging an award in PD’s contest!

Nette Onclaud December 26, 2010 at 7:37 AM laughing out loud! CHEERS for bagging an award in PD’s contest, dane... huggs, nette

Sara Kendrick December 26, 2010 at 5:50 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta December 26, 2010 at 5:34 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Dane

Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2010 at 11:19 PM DANE, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2010 at 3:16 PM wow, this one is amazing. ONe of the BEST

John Loving Iii December 18, 2010 at 4:41 AM you must be going through a dry spell. well nothing you can do untill the spirit returns. i'll be praying for you. love john

Colleen Bono December 17, 2010 at 1:33 PM You have soup mail.

John Loving Iii December 16, 2010 at 9:24 AM you've got me dreamy. john h loving iii

Dr.Ram Mehta December 11, 2010 at 6:32 AM It's a really nice take on the Indian giver, Dane

Andrea Dietrich December 10, 2010 at 8:14 PM ahhh, you made the term indian giver a very kind one, dane ann, love it!

Carolyn Devonshire December 10, 2010 at 5:00 PM Ah, a giver of love!! Nice take on the contest, dear friend. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn