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Indescribable

Indescribable my thoughts hanging out words push to the front suddenly where'd they go twirling off my tongue you're more than just a setting sun Pushing pencil strokes painting beauty in an ever welcomed eye brushes of kindheartedness appear in the shadows controlling the contours and the fear Backdrop stops where colors lie yellow swirls of honey attracting more than just the sweetness of a simple smile inscribing unfiltered desire filling page after page Chapters start and chapters close but I propose that twinkle will never die when the ink dries the syllables will align creating lines describing the indescribable in hues of heavenly descent

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Carol Eastman

Date: 3/26/2017 10:29:00 AM

Absolutely fabulously written. Loved it!

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/22/2017 6:41:00 PM

Hardcore good, Tim. Gotta throw a 7 into the pot here. Man, I am digging those last 3 lines especially.

Sofia Ra

Date: 3/22/2017 4:18:00 PM

Stunning poem!! These words will never die so beautiful to be ever forgotten

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/22/2017 6:47:00 AM

Muse has spoken through you my friend! Such a beautiful poem dear, Tim!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/22/2017 5:44:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. How very true. As long as the thoughts and words are written for the world to see they will not die. They will live on beyond us. How grand is that. Very. You have named this entry perfectly. This is lovely. Well done

White Wolf

Date: 3/21/2017 11:19:00 PM

This is a gem of a poem, Tim! Excellent mate!

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/21/2017 3:42:00 PM

You have described a writer's inspiration with stunning excellence, Tim! 7++

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 3:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Laura

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2017 3:06:00 PM

This is very very beautiful dear friemd.. i have no words...A fave.

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 3:28:00 PM

Yes indescribable ...she's truly one of a kind...thank you Charmu : )

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/21/2017 1:15:00 PM

Pure poetry Tim :-) dreamy imagery with beautiful words of love. blessings, lynn

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 3:26:00 PM

Thanks Lynn...blessings

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 3/21/2017 12:40:00 PM

The fragrance of your lines rises and conjures up colorful aquarelles in my heart. A beautiful write.:) Amitiés

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/21/2017 12:20:00 PM

Great write Tim, I especially like the last line in your first stanza and your last verse is the perfect tie up (!):-)

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 3:24:00 PM

Thanks so much Keith

Chris Green

Date: 3/21/2017 11:49:00 AM

Within love, there is poetry, within poetry, there is love. Especially when I stop by here. Nicely done Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 11:56:00 AM

Thanks Chris, love is what we all crave.

Darren White

Date: 3/21/2017 11:41:00 AM

My friend, you're the master of imagery and poetry that you can taste, but it JUST eludes you, while it doesn't matter because it's so beautiful! Let that twinkle never die, ink never dry and words never cease to fly.

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 11:46:00 AM

Thank you, your words mean very much to me

Sofia Ra

Date: 3/21/2017 11:33:00 AM

Wow what a great job on this poem. Your words are truly beautiful

Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thank you very much Sofia