Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Indescribable

Indescribable
my thoughts hanging out
words push to the front
suddenly   where'd they go
twirling off my tongue
you're more than just a setting sun

Pushing pencil strokes   painting
beauty in an ever welcomed eye
brushes of kindheartedness appear
in the shadows   controlling
the contours and the fear

Backdrop stops where colors lie
yellow swirls of honey
attracting more than just
the sweetness of a simple smile
inscribing unfiltered desire
filling page after page

Chapters start and chapters close
but I propose   that twinkle
will never die  when the ink dries
the syllables will align  creating lines 
describing the indescribable
in hues of heavenly descent

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Carol Eastman March 26, 2017 at 10:29 AM Absolutely fabulously written. Loved it!

Doug Vinson March 22, 2017 at 6:41 PM Hardcore good, Tim. Gotta throw a 7 into the pot here. Man, I am digging those last 3 lines especially.

Sofia Ra March 22, 2017 at 4:18 PM Stunning poem!! These words will never die so beautiful to be ever forgotten

Demetrios Trifiatis March 22, 2017 at 6:47 AM Muse has spoken through you my friend! Such a beautiful poem dear, Tim!

Lisa Ricci March 22, 2017 at 5:44 AM Good Morning Tim. How very true. As long as the thoughts and words are written for the world to see they will not die. They will live on beyond us. How grand is that. Very. You have named this entry perfectly. This is lovely. Well done

White Wolf March 21, 2017 at 11:19 PM This is a gem of a poem, Tim! Excellent mate!

Laura Leiser March 21, 2017 at 3:42 PM You have described a writer's inspiration with stunning excellence, Tim! 7++ Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 3:44 PM Thanks so much Laura

Charmaine Chircop March 21, 2017 at 3:06 PM This is very very beautiful dear friemd.. i have no words...A fave. Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 3:28 PM Yes indescribable ...she's truly one of a kind...thank you Charmu : )

Lynn Marie March 21, 2017 at 1:15 PM Pure poetry Tim :-) dreamy imagery with beautiful words of love. blessings, lynn Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 3:26 PM Thanks Lynn...blessings

Anne-Marie Coreggia March 21, 2017 at 12:40 PM The fragrance of your lines rises and conjures up colorful aquarelles in my heart. A beautiful write.:) Amitiés Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 3:25 PM Thank you for your kindness

Keith O.J. Hunt March 21, 2017 at 12:20 PM Great write Tim, I especially like the last line in your first stanza and your last verse is the perfect tie up (!):-) Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 3:24 PM Thanks so much Keith

Chris Green March 21, 2017 at 11:49 AM Within love, there is poetry, within poetry, there is love. Especially when I stop by here. Nicely done Tim. Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 11:56 AM Thanks Chris, love is what we all crave.

Darren White March 21, 2017 at 11:41 AM My friend, you're the master of imagery and poetry that you can taste, but it JUST eludes you, while it doesn't matter because it's so beautiful! Let that twinkle never die, ink never dry and words never cease to fly. Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 11:46 AM Thank you, your words mean very much to me

Sofia Ra March 21, 2017 at 11:33 AM Wow what a great job on this poem. Your words are truly beautiful Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 11:36 AM Thank you very much Sofia