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Independence Day

Behold, the dark clouds of dependence melt away See, the lull after the storm Untouchable flow of gratification... Yes, we smelt the fragrance of freedom Of course,it is the goal of Indian's life To protect and save our mam Bharath Look, The presence of the great soul Mahathmaji With every waking breathe of our's... Oh,it is the day of Independence, Describe with cartoons of freedom and proud... Say,proudly,we are Indians...we are bold... Jai Bharath matha.. Jai Mahathmaji....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/21/2016 2:56:00 PM
nice to see this one again
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:25:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:27:00 PM
Divya, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/4/2013 12:58:00 PM
about your poem: I am happy to have read it. i like the description of the independence day...alway yet to come... xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/4/2013 12:56:00 PM
Divya, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:36:00 AM
nice write.
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