Independence

It was the night of our Independence
When the clock struck twelve
Flowers bloomed in every nook
Every corner looked unreal
Tiny butterflies flew about
In hope of joining the fete
The men and women of all ages
Stepped out in garments galore
When the world slept peacefully
We entered a new era
The beggars stood in heavenly lights
From crackers bursting forth
Birds changed their sad songs
Singing of new and enchanting lands
No idea of the future
No clear path seen ahead
But men and beast rejoiced 
The gaining of freedom
As the Earth opened its vast arms
To let entrapped soul fly
It was a vision of a miracle
On that fifteenth night of August
When the world slept peacefully

Category- Surreal, when the fact of the Independence of India is mixed with the 
imaginations of the poet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/21/2011 4:47:00 PM
Way to go Tahera, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:01:00 PM
Excellent, I wanted you to go on and on in great detail with color [what color the sky..the fireworks..could you smell sulphfur?]..I wanted to know more. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Deb, Tahera
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:00:00 PM
A great poem you created here, dear Tahera. Congratulations on your win and thanks for your nice comment. Love, iolanda
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:56:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Tahera : )
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congrats Tahera dear friend on your HM in Debbie's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy a very special honor all your own ...my friend..
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:28:00 AM
Wow! What an awesome poem, Tahera! You have a gem here. Love the way a quest for freedom blends with the celebration of this holiday. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:15:00 PM
imagination and reality warpped together in woven taoestry... sheer delight, tahera... winning wishes to yuo! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/18/2011 4:24:00 AM
Very good thankyou
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Date: 4/18/2011 4:10:00 AM
wow, this is amazing, Tahera. I can feel your joy in what happened for India.What year did this take place? (oh, I glanced down and saw that Frank asked the same question!)
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