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Quatrain
A stanza or poem consisting of four lines. In the basic form, Lines 2 and 4 must rhyme  while having a similar number of syllables. 

A plethora of built-up memories forms firm foundations for time to build upon. But Alzheimer's is a mental decay, and all those precious images are gone. Your unique persona has dwindled to a few fragments of the person you were. And time keeps shuffling the missing pieces as your reality begins to blur. Your identity was stolen by age, leaving you feeling confused and afraid. And you can't recognize the ones you love, the ones you count on, for comfort and aid. It's sad when the mind begins to falter, severing a lifetime of connections. For there's no escaping oblivion's collage of incomplete recollections. (Quatrain) 09-23-2020

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Date: 2/6/2022 1:34:00 AM
Emile congrats on your win!;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/6/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thanks, Brenda, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/5/2022 10:28:00 AM
Such an incredible description of this dreaded disease which steals one's memories and consequently one's life experiences. Superb writing, as usual. I'm just starting Scattered Thoughts. Although my body is a mess, so far my mind is sound! Thank God!
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Date: 2/5/2022 1:11:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, hang in there, we will all get through this madness in one piece, sooner or later, or at least I hope so, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2020 5:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... an excellent writing, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/29/2020 9:19:00 PM
Well written my friend , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/29/2020 6:27:00 PM
Emile, yours is great poetry!! So visual, so musical; so smooth!! Congratulations on your Number One Win!!
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thanks Newton, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/29/2020 3:06:00 PM
Hello, Emile. Your subject matter is ideal. Prevalent condition. Hope society will see Dementia's decline through improved treatment in coming decades. Congratulations on a well written Top Winner.!
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Date: 9/29/2020 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Sigrid, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/29/2020 1:44:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, great image too _Constance
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Date: 9/29/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Constance, as usual, you've made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/29/2020 10:56:00 AM
Very poignant showing a deep understanding of the 'chronic day'. Touching. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/23/2020 11:00:00 AM
Dynamic poem, Emile. Your verbs, along with your images, are so powerful and so descriptive of the process of this horrific disease "shuffling," "degraded," "severing." This is a stunning write my friend. I am sure it will be a top winner. Sending you all the best!
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Date: 9/23/2020 11:08:00 AM
Thanks so much Sam, you've made my day my friend, Emile.

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