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Incognito

You are my savior and my special soul seeker, You've unveiled me, And unconfined me from my boundless illusions, Free from this great fatuity;free from cloaking and suppressing. Now, I am manumitted, The veracity and the fact about the demon within my body, You've conceived the reality, You've seen me behind my veneer;the existence who was hiding for a long time. This is me..... A product of dispute and ignorance,enigma and sufferance, A product of doubt and delusion,agony and demoralization, A human of insanity and madness. Have you seen the other being in me? Take a gaze, Of what I hate Of what I love Of who am I..... The real me!!! The great occult secret that was immured within my soul, Now, do you imagine and see Everything you desire. Do what you want Take a little glance Have a glimpse Stare at me... Look at me.... ***A Backward Poem***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 7:42:00 PM
Hey you are REALLY new for your second or first poem to be the backwad poem, but that 's ok. I am very happy to know you here at the Soup, and congrats for your win with Incognito!
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Date: 6/3/2011 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of carolyn, jun-jun
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Date: 6/3/2011 12:12:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Jun-Jun : )
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congrats jun-jun on another fantastic win with this piece from the beginning on PS.. awesome then and now luv..
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Date: 6/3/2011 7:17:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:38:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:42:00 AM
Congrats on your big win with this amazing backword poem!
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:40:00 AM
These backward poems always impress me-- haha I literally rewind and read it back up-- Wonderful poem, Jun-Jun-- you yourself are a wonderful writer! maraming salamat sa mga comments :) Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:37:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:40:00 PM
J.J. V.,, !~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2011 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., jun-jun
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:23:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on another great victory with an excellent entry in old poem contest..enjoy luv..
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:00:00 PM
congrats on your super win. cory
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Date: 5/3/2011 5:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Jun. I will be back again soon to read more. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:26:00 PM
Jun-Jun, Love your poem, a mystery of the 'real you' Dalila
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