Inclination

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                            lock our nature in a box

                               throw away the key

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/5/2018 9:58:00 AM

Brilliant haiku - message delivered in a few powerful lines! Bravo. Hugs. Pandita

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/30/2018 4:28:00 AM

Good Morning Maureen. Excellent execution on the format voice and tone. May the box of nature be kept and the key thrown away only if and when she is in perfect form to savor.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/30/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Lisa! Lovely said. I think this might have placed well if I remembered to enter it ;p A lovely day to you dear poetess. xomo!

Silent One

Date: 4/26/2018 4:04:00 PM

Oooohhh... Can I come? You used to live in England????? When you coming back?

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/26/2018 9:30:00 PM

No immediate plans ;)

Aurore Severo

Date: 4/25/2018 11:49:00 PM

Very true these days!! peace and love xoxo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/26/2018 8:10:00 AM

Pandemic! ;) A lovely day to you! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2018 3:29:00 PM

that was funny I had you drooling over trout. I am not a lover of fish for food! But I sure do love fish and chips. Nice and greasy!! and WOW, this may be my favorite of what I have seen for human nature yet!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/26/2018 7:30:00 AM

When I was five or so I lived on top of a fish and chip shop in England, the smells and flavours some of my oldest memories, tough for any fish and chip dish to compare ;) Thank you so much Andrea!