James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Inciting Mine

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Constantly you throb ‘pon mine 
                member
                 inciting
        recruiting all of mine

        rousing the moments
 
                adoring
                   me
               insisting I
         persist as no other

              collapsing
              entreating

                  Truly

             in your grip
               i have no 
                  mind

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Funom Makama July 9, 2015 at 6:38 AM This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2015 at 9:19 AM My my my - what else can a woman say? ;) Light & Love

Nette Onclaud June 9, 2015 at 9:49 AM ahha, you sneaky fella with that special grip... i had fun with this, james.. huggs

Phyllis Babcock June 7, 2015 at 6:54 PM A few naughty thoughts grip as I read this poem. A few words but creates a lot of image. love phyl

Harry Horsman June 1, 2015 at 9:03 AM Truly wonderful poetry,,,James you are an inspiration...

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2015 at 6:17 PM Love that last part ; in your grip I have no mind. Awesome.

Constance La France May 24, 2015 at 3:14 PM James, you are so darn romantic and naughty, a sexy 7 and thanks for visiting my poem today and leaving the nice comment

Daver Austin May 24, 2015 at 11:37 AM "No mind" is right! In the grip one becomes another person, reverts to a mere animal. Good stuff, Sir James. Love, Horny Dog daver

Laura Breidenthal May 24, 2015 at 5:31 AM Your poetry always gives freedom to the mind's imagination, and I love that about your work! This is an awesome one, to say the least. Love those last lines too... Great as always, dear James! Love reading your masterful work! Always, Laura

Kp Nunez May 24, 2015 at 2:50 AM Dear poet, how come you almost always deal with same theme yet you never run out of the intriguing, daring but oddly enough, one feels your sincerity in these lines? A 7. Kim PS. Have a great weekend as well!

Afolabi Muideen May 23, 2015 at 11:02 PM Well penned James, it so lovely, thanks for Shared this beautiful piece.......Afolabi.

Nette Onclaud May 21, 2015 at 3:04 PM love the undertones of excitement, james.. greeat job!.. huggs