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Inciting Mine

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Constantly you throb ‘pon mine 
                member
                 inciting
        recruiting all of mine

        rousing the moments
 
                adoring
                   me
               insisting I
         persist as no other

              collapsing
              entreating

                  Truly

             in your grip
               i have no 
                  mind

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 6:38:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2015 9:19:00 AM

My my my - what else can a woman say? ;) Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2015 9:49:00 AM

ahha, you sneaky fella with that special grip... i had fun with this, james.. huggs

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/7/2015 6:54:00 PM

A few naughty thoughts grip as I read this poem. A few words but creates a lot of image. love phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/1/2015 9:03:00 AM

Truly wonderful poetry,,,James you are an inspiration...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2015 6:17:00 PM

Love that last part ; in your grip I have no mind. Awesome.

Constance La France

Date: 5/24/2015 3:14:00 PM

James, you are so darn romantic and naughty, a sexy 7 and thanks for visiting my poem today and leaving the nice comment

Daver Austin

Date: 5/24/2015 11:37:00 AM

"No mind" is right! In the grip one becomes another person, reverts to a mere animal. Good stuff, Sir James. Love, Horny Dog daver

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/24/2015 5:31:00 AM

Your poetry always gives freedom to the mind's imagination, and I love that about your work! This is an awesome one, to say the least. Love those last lines too... Great as always, dear James! Love reading your masterful work! Always, Laura

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/24/2015 2:50:00 AM

Dear poet, how come you almost always deal with same theme yet you never run out of the intriguing, daring but oddly enough, one feels your sincerity in these lines? A 7. Kim PS. Have a great weekend as well!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/23/2015 11:02:00 PM

Well penned James, it so lovely, thanks for Shared this beautiful piece.......Afolabi.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2015 3:04:00 PM

love the undertones of excitement, james.. greeat job!.. huggs