Incessant Wrestle

So the heart murmurs and the kidneys fail, 
The lungs draw wheezing breath as tedious chore, 
The joints in every limb - feeble and frail, 
The mind doesn’t remember anymore…

Yet somehow, something, somewhere out of sight, 
Is full of joyous, everlasting light. 
Now it is time to call a spade a spade 
With the last winning trump card to be played. 

As the ailing body mocks with grim grin, 
As aging organs pull the faulty strings, 
It feels the battle’s lost, fragile and thin - 
Yet stroppy spirit sings on soaring wings!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodgers Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Margarita, your poem is a poignant exploration of the human condition. Your verses beautifully capture the struggle between existence's physical and spiritual aspects, offering a glimmer of hope amidst the stark reality of mortality. The rhythm and rhyme scheme lends a musical quality to your words, making the reader feel the ‘stroppy spirit’ singing on soaring wings. A truly moving piece! -Blessings, Daniel
Lillico  Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thank you Daniel, what a great comment, moved me as well. Cheers!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Keeping up the spirits! Our bodies fail yet those stroppy spirits sing on soaring wings, sore as they are. Enjoyed this! Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Thanks Kim!
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Robert's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us, Sara K
Lillico  Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Sandra!
Radice Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Loved this - but I particularly liked the positive sentiment Margarita in your last line. Thanks for sharing. "Ageing (we Brits keep the 'e') is just another word for living." - That's what I keep telling myself anyway. Cheers - Gary
Lillico  Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 12:34 PM
I like that, we are now living with grace therefore:)
Gondolf Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:21 AM
It's such a shame the body has to age while the mind still feels like it's 35!!! Seems like my body keeps reminding me of my age. Hugs.
Lillico  Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Like a clock :)
Turner Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Thats exactly right Maggie. Dont get off the ride until it stops. Great to see you again . I hope life is treating you well:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:58 PM
I like the style with which you adressed this topic. Very creative.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:29 PM
I enjoyed your write. Good Luck... We both did this one. Have a great/fun day......................
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