Ghairo Daniels Poet Tail-rhyme

Inception Valentine

opposite poles tune attraction 
contracted manifestation
questing abstracted refraction 
passions spin and spar ~
penetrating fallacies deep
climax stellar tasks in gem sleep
chemistryprem pulls, hugs and shrugs bleep
and yet here we are …

 

            
[ Third Place Win : Premier Contest : Feb 26
Honorable Win : All Poetry Contest : Feb 26 ]

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David Crandall February 4, 2026 at 9:41 PM An exciting valentine! Ghairo Daniels February 4, 2026 at 10:28 PM ThkU for visit, David. Xxx

Paige Hind February 2, 2026 at 8:25 PM congrats I am so happy for your placement in the contest!! <3 i think i am putting this in my favs this time Ghairo Daniels February 2, 2026 at 10:58 PM ThkU, PH. Know that you are much loved, though don’t even know what you look like. I feel your consistent support & return the energy in high frequency. Xx

Kim Rodrigues February 2, 2026 at 6:55 PM passions spin and spar ~ penetrating fallacies deep…nearly sensual! Congrts! Ghairo Daniels February 2, 2026 at 10:59 PM ThkU Kim for visiting- yes, nearly sensual. But made up. Lol. B blessed.

Linda Alice Fowler February 2, 2026 at 2:22 PM Congratulations Ghairo! :) Ghairo Daniels February 2, 2026 at 11:00 PM ThkU, Linda. Blessings. X.

Suzette Richards February 2, 2026 at 7:19 AM Congratulations, Ghairo, on your third-place win in my Valentine contest. You have developed a voice that is unmistakeable—the melding of enquiries with the gentler aspects of prose and poetry. Also see my latest blog: Contests – Fertile Ground for Learning Ghairo Daniels February 2, 2026 at 11:03 PM ThkU for your time commitment here, Su. You are a valuable member of this community. I appreciate. Will check out your blog. It has an interesting title that I’ve thought about too. Lov.

I Am Anaya February 2, 2026 at 7:10 AM Congratulations GD, you put much research, «Spiritual», into this. Love,love,love it! "passions spin and spar " Great line Ghairo Daniels February 2, 2026 at 11:05 PM Hi Anaya. Merci for visit. No research at all. Messing about with Love & Words = dangerous. ( you should know ! )xxxx

Victor Buhagiar February 1, 2026 at 9:52 PM Romance and physics intertwine. Brilliantly done. Ghairo Daniels February 2, 2026 at 11:08 PM ThkU for comment, Victor. I do appreciate your regular visits. Romance is physics in motion at an illusory level. In the final analysis, everything is illusion. High frequency your way.

Paige Hind January 29, 2026 at 5:36 PM perfect poetry, Ghairo!!! yours on this contest is best <3

Daniel Henry Rodgers January 28, 2026 at 7:56 AM Dear Ghairo, . I love how you let the poem hover between science and seduction, all spin and spark, and still land on that understated, almost amused final line. It feels like two people orbiting the same mystery and pretending they’re not. Excellent! Winter Blessings, Ghairo, Daniel Ghairo Daniels January 29, 2026 at 8:43 AM ThkU for read & comment, Daniel. Last line is innuendo for HeartSpace where animus & anima meet Godhead for a 3in1 commune/ not mystical at all when one understands quantum mechanics as relating to evolution of DNA & role of dualism therein. (connection in separation/separation in connection) Rainbow Blessings from South.

Karen Jones January 27, 2026 at 9:30 PM Very unique and engaging! If for contest it will do well! Ghairo Daniels January 28, 2026 at 9:03 AM ThkU for pop-in, read & comment. KJ. Xx