Incandescence Blooms

new lovers - glowing - 
explore each other's bodies

      incandescence blooms

              the moon peeks down through branches
                                    of the oak two lie beneath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 2:29 AM
A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, ANDREA
A. Sharma Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Saying much in few is a marvel Andrea n u r so gud at it! congrats on win !
A  Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Andrea, this was nice, Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~
Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 9:23 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
Guzzi Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Haven't got a handle on this one yet glad to see you did SO well. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Su's "Tanka-The Pivot" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Gasun Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, Andrea! love/hugs, LG
Ryerson Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 7:20 PM
Whew!...Love under the old oak tree? VERY nice and I like the interesting layout, spacing, etc....makes it even more compelling...congrats my friend! - Tim
A   Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Andrea, congrats in the tanka contest :-) always~ pd
Puddifoot Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 2:54 PM
blooming indeed, andrea! a very sensual tanka; I like the unusual line layout you have here, it works very well, congrats! :-)
Babcock Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Yes I am having trouble with soup mail and cannot send it out. Thanks for the heads up that others are having problems as well. Love the imagery in this poem. Leaves lots to imagine ha ha. love phyl
Gasun Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 4:20 PM
This is outstanding! I love it! I hope I can make one. Good luck and best wishes always my dear friend! hugs:)LG
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 6:48 AM
Interesting work..Winner for sure..I have looked at the contest but I needed to do some research and haven't..Thanks for stopping by..I don't know how I missed this one..Sara
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:14 PM
the title drew me in, the images kept me reading...as lovely as i had thought it would be, you handle this form very well!
Susan Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 7:57 AM
nice imagery! best wishes in the contest :)
Pettit Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 11:57 PM
Suzette should like this one because I like it. Good work as usual Andrea.
Poet Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 11:10 PM
You have penned down a very romantic atmosphere in this tanka Andrea.Good pivot line here.Best wishes to you.
Wellington Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Hey Andrea, place me under the branches of this oak, I would like to be the star of this amazing Tanka write! Best of wishes. One love. Joy Wells
Song Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 2:59 PM
I like Joe's comment below...I too wonder how many lovers this oak has seen....? Romantic setting with nature curiously taking a peek! Love it! (NO BUG BITES IN THE POEM?...awwww,...give the lovers a few bug bites!! hahaahhahah....Suzette should really appreciate this entry!
Johnson Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:51 PM
That kind of moon glow will keep you young! I missed your contest on clerihew's. Stupid library hours. :) I hear happy birthday is in order, late or otherwise, HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANDREA!
Maverick Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Well theres a tank full of emotion in this one Andrea.." Wonder how many Lovers the oak has seen?? (Enjoyed)
Maverick Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Oh and best wishes 4 contest
K. Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 11:02 AM
I really enjoyed this sweet tanka of yours-- and such a cool & unique line that is, "incandescence blooms".... and with the moon playing peek-a-boo, that is very nice how you did that-- speeding through here and I got to go. I gave in to your request and posted a sorta old poem ;). Written in August. Gotta sleep now, hugs to you sweetie!
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October 14, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Beautiful Andea!!! fantastic images... Love it... hugs Michael
Kapoor Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Your have painted a picturesque beauty to read, to behold and to get lost in the charms of your Moon blooms. A beauty to watch and to feel. My good wishes for your contest entry. Hope you are keeping fine. My eye problem is slightly better, so I am more with all of you. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:47 AM
stunning turn of images, andie... a winning gem--- the oak came through!.. :) love his!...:) huggs
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