Inappropriate Attire

It is the evening I have waited for, 
stiletto heels three inches high adorned my feet,
real nylons hung from garters beneath a
skin tight, leather skirt of maraschino cherry-red.
A blouse of white silk, with a cascade of ruffles,
played peek-a-boo with my décolletage.
Outdoors, the rain pounded the asphalt  
making the reality of his arrival even more bizarre.
A Harley barrels into the driveway.
Apparently, he thinks 
he is Marlon Brando
and I am Stella?

I stand on the porch, a black umbrella
covering my new do, and watch as he
saunters through the puddles on the concrete walk.
The color of the umbrella my only 
non-incongruent element in the frame, the scene made.
His smile was like a box of Chiclet's
on his clean shaven face.
He kisses me.

I lick the raindrop
from the tip of his Roman nose
and take hold of his Russian fingers.
He tosses my umbrella on the porch,
throws his black leather jacket over my shoulders,
lifts me off my feet, and carries me to the bike.

The sun breaks through the clouds and the rain stops,
just in time for the neighbors to glare at the sight of my legs 
reflecting on the bikes chrome work.
Shake their respective heads
and donate a few wolf whistles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/14/2014 10:10:00 AM
Word painting. Nice work.
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Date: 11/27/2013 3:51:00 PM
Debbie The descriptions and imagery you use in this write makes the reader feel like they are right there with you. Nice job thanks for the congrats on my Eyeful Of Emotions poem
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Date: 7/4/2013 5:41:00 AM
The only thing holding me tighter than his arms were those garters. Don't you just love men.. That's a wow wow Debbie..
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:08:00 AM
cool
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Date: 6/29/2013 5:38:00 AM
What a wonderful poem. You described the scene so perfectly that the readers could have been witnesses. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/28/2013 3:31:00 PM
I enjoyed this read. A well deserved win. Congrats! Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:33:00 PM
Congrats, Debbie. Long, low whistles to ya...Jake
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:26:00 AM
Jmmmmm hmmmmmm...Lovely ..sexy sweet and charming you are..I loved your creative post dear ma : )..Going to my favourites
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Date: 6/26/2013 8:53:00 AM
devilishly charming that deserves a big hoot!.. conggrats on your stunning win, debbie..:) huggs
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Date: 6/26/2013 8:36:00 AM
Love it!!!!...everyword:0) congratulations, debbie, very descriptive. Enjoyed reading your work...
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Date: 6/25/2013 1:03:00 PM
Hmmmmmmm.......
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Date: 6/22/2013 8:35:00 AM
What a ride..whew! Love it. BG
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Date: 6/22/2013 7:17:00 AM
WOW! WOW! WOW! I saw it all in my head, Debbie! Way to go....LOVE the purr of a Harley and the attire...well! The whistles were well deserved. Hugs!
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Date: 6/21/2013 11:15:00 PM
This is very interesting, Debbie, and thank you so much for the placement you gave me!! Jag
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