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In Your Genes

A teenager goes to the dance All swelled up with hopes of a chance Makes an advance Gets in her pants Looks around for a new romance

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/8/2021 5:03:00 PM

Yep. On to the next challenge, lol.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/7/2021 1:42:00 PM

Interesting. This can be interpreted in several ways, can't it? A 'modern art' masterpiece, perhaps. ~ gw

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2021 2:01:00 PM

Ahhh!! The truth spoken. Enjoyed reading..Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/4/2021 1:48:00 PM

sounds about right, rico! good one!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/4/2021 12:28:00 PM

Yep, so typical of teenage boys! Although most of the time, I suspect he doesn't "get in her pants!"

Marilene Evans

Date: 10/4/2021 11:38:00 AM

There's no love.... only those uncontrollable hormones at work.... YIKES... poor girls...

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/4/2021 11:45:00 AM

What? You never heard of girls doing the dirty on boys? Girls instinctively know square pegs don't fit in round holes and one must go shopping to find the perfect fit!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/4/2021 11:18:00 AM

Love em and leave em, sounds like Jack the lad lol. Tom

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/4/2021 11:26:00 AM

Teenage lives would be happier if they were taught to distinguish between love and pheromones! Thanks for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico