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In Your Embrace

In embrace of your love, blossoms my eager night, Strumming themes romantic fervid passions recite Invoked by scarlet-eventide glinting arc of twilight As final breaths of dimming-day golden rays ignite Signaling to emotive vibes twinkling on starry skies Now’s the time for constellations to bedazzle eyes In magenta, red nebulae buoying upon stellar seas Navigating tides of joy as smiles of Venus appease When enamored we stroll lauding exuberance of glee Bequeathed by dreams, mystiques of desires spree, In missives of forever-love verses of hearts decree Responding to overtures, aspirations intimate plea, Giving voice to latent hints echoing proffers of soul Vying reveries esoteric sensuous heartbeats cajole Prodding us to waltz, to rhythms of nocturnal tune, Attuning beats of hearts beneath love-struck moon. May 10, 2023 Placed 1st: Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/17/2023 10:49:00 AM

Belated congratulations on this sensuous couplet Vijay! :)

Michael Tor

Date: 6/13/2023 8:35:00 AM

Vijay wow! Thats all I can say. Another favorite my friend...

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/8/2023 6:00:00 AM

Some brilliant verses my friend. The ending 4 verses especially so! ""Giving voice to latent hints echoing proffers of soul Vying reveries esoteric sensuous heartbeats cajole Prodding us to waltz, to rhythms of nocturnal tune, Attuning beats of hearts beneath love-struck moon.'' A definite fav and a gem as well.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/20/2023 4:25:00 PM

A lovely love poem in Couplet form, Vijay. I was going to say good luck, but noticed the comment below and will change that to Congratulations on your win, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2023 10:50:00 AM

- Just as wonderful and romantic today... congratulations, I knew this would win :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/16/2023 10:14:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening;-) Alexis

Valsa George

Date: 5/16/2023 8:15:00 PM

Hearty Congratulations on your well placed first place win dear Vijay!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/16/2023 7:38:00 PM

Great couplets. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/16/2023 11:37:00 AM

Vijay, your writing is brilliant and evocative. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves a standing ovation. Congratulations on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:43:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind feedback my friend. Many thanks for sponsoring contests, Lasaad.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/16/2023 8:08:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic, Vijay, as always you have delivered a super winner:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/14/2023 9:34:00 AM

Brilliant writing, my dear friend, Vijay. I loved it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:42:00 PM

That is very nice to hear--especially from you my friend. Many thanks, Demetrios.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/13/2023 11:46:00 PM

This is breathlessly beautiful Vijay. "In magenta, red nebulae buoying upon stellar seas, Navigating tides of joy as smiles of Venus appease" Oh my goodness. I love this so much, and those particular words were really dazzling, but I love your entire poem. <3

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:41:00 PM

So very kind of you, BJ. Much appreciate. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2023 8:28:00 AM

Oh!! So the moon is love-struck. Wow!! I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Thanks for sharing this one that is a good contender for the contest. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:40:00 PM

Much appreciate, Sara--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/13/2023 7:06:00 AM

Stunning, beautiful poem Vijay and I love the ending too. A Fave for me. ! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:40:00 PM

So nice to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your feedback and most certainly your FAVE. Many thanks, as always, Heidi.

Valsa George

Date: 5/12/2023 11:58:00 PM

You are indeed a true bard of love. Wonderful images of a star lit sky and below it the movie of love unfurling in exotic reels. Love it. All the Best Vijay !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:39:00 PM

Many thanks Valsa. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Joseph May

Date: 5/12/2023 4:46:00 PM

Bwautiful write Vijay, best for a top win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2023 12:38:00 PM

Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/12/2023 10:13:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, You have penned a lovely and romantic write. It had good content with vivid and engaging imagery. I found it to be sensual and passionate as well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:42:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Alexis. Many thanks my friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/12/2023 6:01:00 AM

Vijay, you have penned a lovely, romantic, appealing piece! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 7:21:00 AM

So nice to hear that from you Janice. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/11/2023 7:02:00 PM

I just love this thought: "Now’s the time for constellations to bedazzle eyes." The night sky is so magical and dreamy. Your rhyming couplets create such a beautiful mood, Vijay. Good luck in the contest, my sweet friend. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 5:49:00 AM

Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate your insights, as always, my friend. Glad you liked the poem, Brandy. Many thanks.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/11/2023 5:03:00 PM

Delightfully romantic. Stirringly lovely images. This is a fave.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 5:47:00 AM

So nice to hear that, Evelyn. Much appreciate your succinct, thoughtful feedback and delighted by your FAVE. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/11/2023 1:47:00 PM

Vijay, I went back in and now it should be faved!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/11/2023 3:34:00 PM

Thank you Kim for your return visit and taking the time to read my reply. Much appreciate, my friend. You are very kind.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2023 11:12:00 AM

- A wonderful and romantic poem, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/11/2023 5:31:00 AM

Delighted to hear that from you, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/10/2023 11:11:00 AM

Beautifully composed romantic couplets Vijay. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/11/2023 5:30:00 AM

Nice to hear that from your Tom. Always appreciate and value your presence on my page. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2023 8:12:00 AM

Your poems are always fabulous. Great ending.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/11/2023 5:30:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many thanks, as always.

Deb M

Date: 5/10/2023 6:41:00 AM

How beautifully you write Vijay….a wonderful poem and l just love the last two lines that ends the poem perfectly! Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/11/2023 5:29:00 AM

So very kind of you to say so, Deb. Glad you stopped by with your cheerful feedback. Many thanks.