Vijay Pandit Poet Couplet

In Your Embrace

In embrace of your love, blossoms my eager night,
Strumming themes romantic fervid passions recite

Invoked by scarlet-eventide glinting arc of twilight
As final breaths of dimming-day golden rays ignite

Signaling to emotive vibes twinkling on starry skies
Now’s the time for constellations to bedazzle eyes

In magenta, red nebulae buoying upon stellar seas 
Navigating tides of joy as smiles of Venus appease

When enamored we stroll lauding exuberance of glee
Bequeathed by dreams, mystiques of desires spree,

In missives of forever-love verses of hearts decree
Responding to overtures, aspirations intimate plea,

Giving voice to latent hints echoing proffers of soul
Vying reveries esoteric sensuous heartbeats cajole

Prodding us to waltz, to rhythms of nocturnal tune,
Attuning beats of hearts beneath love-struck moon.

May 10, 2023
Placed 1st: Couplet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Linda Alice Fowler June 17, 2023 at 10:49 AM Belated congratulations on this sensuous couplet Vijay! :)

Michael Tor June 13, 2023 at 8:35 AM Vijay wow! Thats all I can say. Another favorite my friend...

Robert Lindley June 8, 2023 at 6:00 AM Some brilliant verses my friend. The ending 4 verses especially so! ""Giving voice to latent hints echoing proffers of soul Vying reveries esoteric sensuous heartbeats cajole Prodding us to waltz, to rhythms of nocturnal tune, Attuning beats of hearts beneath love-struck moon.'' A definite fav and a gem as well.

Bill Baker May 20, 2023 at 4:25 PM A lovely love poem in Couplet form, Vijay. I was going to say good luck, but noticed the comment below and will change that to Congratulations on your win, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2023 at 10:50 AM - Just as wonderful and romantic today... congratulations, I knew this would win :) - hugs

Alexis Y. May 16, 2023 at 10:14 PM Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening;-) Alexis

Valsa George May 16, 2023 at 8:15 PM Hearty Congratulations on your well placed first place win dear Vijay!

Christuraj Alex May 16, 2023 at 7:38 PM Great couplets. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet May 16, 2023 at 11:37 AM Vijay, your writing is brilliant and evocative. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves a standing ovation. Congratulations on your win. Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:43 PM Much appreciate your kind feedback my friend. Many thanks for sponsoring contests, Lasaad.

Joanna Daniel May 16, 2023 at 8:08 AM Beautiful and romantic, Vijay, as always you have delivered a super winner:) Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:42 PM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 14, 2023 at 9:34 AM Brilliant writing, my dear friend, Vijay. I loved it. Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:42 PM That is very nice to hear--especially from you my friend. Many thanks, Demetrios.

Bj Legros Kelley May 13, 2023 at 11:46 PM This is breathlessly beautiful Vijay. "In magenta, red nebulae buoying upon stellar seas, Navigating tides of joy as smiles of Venus appease" Oh my goodness. I love this so much, and those particular words were really dazzling, but I love your entire poem. <3 Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:41 PM So very kind of you, BJ. Much appreciate. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Sara Kendrick May 13, 2023 at 8:28 AM Oh!! So the moon is love-struck. Wow!! I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Thanks for sharing this one that is a good contender for the contest. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:40 PM Much appreciate, Sara--many thanks.

Heidi Sands May 13, 2023 at 7:06 AM Stunning, beautiful poem Vijay and I love the ending too. A Fave for me. ! :) Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:40 PM So nice to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your feedback and most certainly your FAVE. Many thanks, as always, Heidi.

Valsa George May 12, 2023 at 11:58 PM You are indeed a true bard of love. Wonderful images of a star lit sky and below it the movie of love unfurling in exotic reels. Love it. All the Best Vijay ! Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:39 PM Many thanks Valsa. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Joseph May May 12, 2023 at 4:46 PM Bwautiful write Vijay, best for a top win Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 12:38 PM Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.

Alexis Y. May 12, 2023 at 10:13 AM WoW! Vijay, You have penned a lovely and romantic write. It had good content with vivid and engaging imagery. I found it to be sensual and passionate as well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit May 12, 2023 at 12:42 PM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Alexis. Many thanks my friend.

Janice Canerdy May 12, 2023 at 6:01 AM Vijay, you have penned a lovely, romantic, appealing piece! Janice Vijay Pandit May 12, 2023 at 7:21 AM So nice to hear that from you Janice. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole May 11, 2023 at 7:02 PM I just love this thought: "Now’s the time for constellations to bedazzle eyes." The night sky is so magical and dreamy. Your rhyming couplets create such a beautiful mood, Vijay. Good luck in the contest, my sweet friend. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 12, 2023 at 5:49 AM Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate your insights, as always, my friend. Glad you liked the poem, Brandy. Many thanks.

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 11, 2023 at 5:03 PM Delightfully romantic. Stirringly lovely images. This is a fave. Vijay Pandit May 12, 2023 at 5:47 AM So nice to hear that, Evelyn. Much appreciate your succinct, thoughtful feedback and delighted by your FAVE. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Kim Rodrigues May 11, 2023 at 1:47 PM Vijay, I went back in and now it should be faved! Vijay Pandit May 11, 2023 at 3:34 PM Thank you Kim for your return visit and taking the time to read my reply. Much appreciate, my friend. You are very kind.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2023 at 11:12 AM - A wonderful and romantic poem, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Vijay Pandit May 11, 2023 at 5:31 AM Delighted to hear that from you, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham May 10, 2023 at 11:11 AM Beautifully composed romantic couplets Vijay. Best of luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit May 11, 2023 at 5:30 AM Nice to hear that from your Tom. Always appreciate and value your presence on my page. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar May 10, 2023 at 8:12 AM Your poems are always fabulous. Great ending. Vijay Pandit May 11, 2023 at 5:30 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many thanks, as always.

Deb M May 10, 2023 at 6:41 AM How beautifully you write Vijay….a wonderful poem and l just love the last two lines that ends the poem perfectly! Debx Vijay Pandit May 11, 2023 at 5:29 AM So very kind of you to say so, Deb. Glad you stopped by with your cheerful feedback. Many thanks.

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