Line Gauthier Poet Lay

In Your Arms

I lay my head on your shoulder
Think back when we were less older
Then we boldly flaunted our youth
Carefree living on love and truth
In a frenzy the years flew by
Our bond grew stronger neath a sigh
We laid those solid foundations
For well earned adulations



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on January 17, 2020 for contest STRAND ANY FORM, ANY THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

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Sam Kauffman January 18, 2020 at 10:36 PM Hi Line, I love the movement of this poem from young love to maturity! Nicely done. Congratulations! Line Gauthier January 19, 2020 at 9:37 PM Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.

Edward Ibeh January 18, 2020 at 3:58 PM Awesome poem, Line:-) Congrats! Line Gauthier January 19, 2020 at 9:36 PM Thank you so much, Edward. Much appreciated.

Brenda Chiri January 18, 2020 at 2:41 PM Line congratulations on your win!;) Line Gauthier January 19, 2020 at 9:36 PM Thank you so much, Brenda. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire January 17, 2020 at 3:58 PM Wonderful! Line Gauthier January 17, 2020 at 7:11 PM Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf January 15, 2020 at 9:44 PM 'Our bond grew stronger neath a sigh.' Lovely said, Line --- the whole poem. Cheers, Gershon Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 11:56 PM Thank you, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Pat Adams January 15, 2020 at 3:04 PM The down side of finding "The One" is how the time really does fly! I can relate to this very well rhymed and articulated piece. Well done Line!....pat Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 3:26 PM Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Pat.

Constance La France January 15, 2020 at 11:42 AM Line, this is truly beautiful, this is a special love _ Constance Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 2:26 PM Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.

Chris Green January 15, 2020 at 8:18 AM Beautifully done Line. A wonderful piece of writing. Best wishes in the contest Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 2:25 PM Thanks, Chris... But I missed the contest by a split second it seems.

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 5:44 AM Warm, heartfelt and just beautiful. Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 2:25 PM Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.

John Watt January 14, 2020 at 10:55 PM A touching poetic tribute to a soul mate ~ John Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 1:00 AM Thank you, John. Much appreciated.

Jenish Somadas January 14, 2020 at 10:30 PM Fantastic entry in the contest.. Good luck Line.. Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 1:00 AM Sadly I somehow missed the contest.

Caren Krutsinger January 14, 2020 at 10:10 PM Gorgeous lines, Line. Pun intended. Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 1:01 AM Thanks, Caren.

Sandra Adams January 14, 2020 at 8:59 PM beautiful Line... :) hugs Line Gauthier January 15, 2020 at 1:01 AM Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.