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In Your Arms

I lay my head on your shoulder Think back when we were less older Then we boldly flaunted our youth Carefree living on love and truth In a frenzy the years flew by Our bond grew stronger neath a sigh We laid those solid foundations For well earned adulations Submitted on January 17, 2020 for contest STRAND ANY FORM, ANY THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD Originally posted on January 14, 2020

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/18/2020 10:36:00 PM

Hi Line, I love the movement of this poem from young love to maturity! Nicely done. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/19/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/18/2020 3:58:00 PM

Awesome poem, Line:-) Congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/19/2020 9:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Edward. Much appreciated.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/18/2020 2:41:00 PM

Line congratulations on your win!;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/19/2020 9:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Brenda. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/17/2020 3:58:00 PM

Wonderful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/17/2020 7:11:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2020 9:44:00 PM

'Our bond grew stronger neath a sigh.' Lovely said, Line --- the whole poem. Cheers, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/15/2020 11:56:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Pat Adams

Date: 1/15/2020 3:04:00 PM

The down side of finding "The One" is how the time really does fly! I can relate to this very well rhymed and articulated piece. Well done Line!....pat

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/15/2020 3:26:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Pat.