In Walmart

I find myself foraging, basket in hand
among the cocoa harvests of distant lands.

A shaft of light crashes
like a Chinese paratrooper
through the store’s skylight,
rays pieces high-stacked shelves,
beam upon all-consuming shoppers,
flash briefly upon brimful spandex.

It is then I realize that all I need is you,
not cut-price plastic hole fillers,
from this warehouse of empty dreams,
nor anything blue, green, or yellow
seen on T.V. 

but then I remember the wine
and beers in aisle twenty-two -
but I still I love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Delaney Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 7:50 PM
Good one, Eric. I had to laugh at brimful spandex and your closing. Good fun.
Ashford Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Suzanne, glad you enjoyed. e
Witmer Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 10:09 AM
whimsical fun, it transports. So realistic in the handling of attention. I really like this. It drew me away from my "why so serious" vent.
Ashford Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Thanks again vernon, yep life is too serious to be taken seriously. Appreciate you take on this one. Best e
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