In Vases

In vases all across the land
Red roses have the upper hand,
Presented, proudly, to the wives
Who share their husbands' beds and lives.

Most likely, such a posh bouquet 
Would not appear except the day
When special plans must be arranged
So Valentines might be exchanged.

The roses stand up tall and straight
Before succumbing to their fate 
For as the days drift by, they'll droop,
Their water turned to murky soup.

The vases will go back on shelves 
With nothing to amuse themselves 
Until this time next year rolls 'round 
When filled with roses they'll be found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/20/2019 4:11:00 PM
Cut roses, besides expensive, have a short vase life. That's the bad news. The good news is that they'll last for years when pressed in a book. My mother was money-tight and preferred plastic roses. Until the day she died, she had a bunch of them going on 50 years! Looking back on this, she saved me hundreds of dollars! Truthful poem. / M
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Date: 2/17/2019 12:35:00 AM
You have explained the cycle of valentines day quite well, my friend. This is exactly why I forbid my husband to buy me cut flowers. I want them to live - forever.
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Date: 2/15/2019 3:30:00 PM
Aw fantastic poem :))) xomo!
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Date: 2/15/2019 3:18:00 PM
The wheel of the gods grind slowly! Well done, Ilene! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/15/2019 3:14:00 PM
I like this piece...rather sad in a way ...well written.BG
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