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In Twilight Hours

In twilight hours I find my peace. Day’s obligations have been met. It’s time to find my soul’s release while over hills sun starts to set. Life’s trials will go on, and yet with meditation, worries cease. The balm of calm I wish to get while seeing heaven turn cerise. Jan. 23, 2020 for charles messina's Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/23/2020 8:41:00 PM
Twilight - such a peaceful time of day so beautifully captured! Congratulations on your winning HM.
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Date: 2/16/2020 6:20:00 PM
Andrea, this is such wise counsel - meditating on nature (sunsets in particular) has that calming effect that our stress-filled minds and bodies need. Awesome write in a little itty-bitty living space! Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 2/16/2020 2:10:00 PM
This is a great piece, Andrea. Terrific write...Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Date: 2/16/2020 11:14:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me! That is why I am pleased that we have a close relationship wherein you encourage me and enlighten me which helps me become better at writing poems. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/1/2020 4:52:00 PM
So evocative of peace and enlightenment, this stirs something in me, I may have to keep this one...
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Date: 1/24/2020 8:35:00 AM
Anything cherry...cerise! A lovely twisted char-lay!
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Date: 1/24/2020 8:19:00 AM
"soul's release" this is exactly what I wish all people would realise.
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Date: 1/24/2020 7:09:00 AM
A peaceful feeling to read your poem--you speak for many in their twilight hours.
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Date: 1/23/2020 11:55:00 PM
Andrea, this is very soothing. I like "the balm of calm". Glad to see you entered this contest... good job on the tricky rhyme scheme and good luck. I know this one will do well. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 1/23/2020 10:45:00 PM
Lovely poem, Andrea.
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Date: 1/23/2020 10:07:00 PM
Very good enjoyed read. My favorite line: with meditation, worries cease. Best regards and wishes.
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Date: 1/23/2020 9:35:00 PM
Andrea, Just dropped by to find some peace for myself. Good luck in CM's contest. -Richard
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