In Tranistus

the daylight fades a scarlet tiger awakes, preys and mates- procreates as woolly bears

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Heidie Buys

Date: 8/30/2008 4:39:00 PM

A very vivid description as always. Well done. Regards Heidie

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 8/30/2008 1:44:00 AM

I like the flow of this tanka. The imagery of nature is profound. Great job! ~Joseph

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/29/2008 3:24:00 AM

What a sunset! I have seen that tiger turn to bear and it is an amazing sight! Lovely images here, Brian, love Kristin

James Foulk

Date: 8/28/2008 11:10:00 AM

a wonderful piece of poetry, really enjoyed this. thank you for reading my too full of love and for your comment

Sean Kelly

Date: 8/28/2008 7:58:00 AM

Clever , inventive descriptions , Brian... Any chance of finding our Celtic Tiger ? He seems to be missing , at the moment..

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/28/2008 6:33:00 AM

Well Brian how are you today - very interesting poem of nature - Great job - God Bless

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/28/2008 4:51:00 AM

This is a short reead, but you manage to put so much into it, there's so much happening in this piece. Terrific use of imagery with a smooth flowing read. Very well written. Michael