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In This Place of Old

On silken sheets, curvaceous she Alluring eyes are drawn to me Pert, excited she craves my hand In loving caress, two in understand Gently we kiss like Rose petals soft Whilst exterior storms lash our Highland croft Candle light flickers across the walls we dance Postures so sexy, delightful we stance Passionate sighs thrall, in this place so old Body temperatures rise deflecting it's cold We are two become one in thunderous lust Wanting we are absorbing loving so just Hands wander tease in adventurous taunt Kissing aplenty in sexily want Avenues pursued amidst erogenous groans Candle light dims as it bows to our moans Loving sighs implode, together we lie graced Enriched in we, in this wonderful place Drifting souls entwined now entering tomorrows dreams Displaying wonderful colours, like rainbow streams http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-16.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/13/2011 6:02:00 PM
This was quite a write. Just goes to show there's a fire in the furnace while there's snow on the roof. Excellent poem. Vince
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Date: 2/13/2011 3:51:00 PM
Very romantic and sensual, wonderfully written, I love it~~
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:53:00 PM
The ending of this is so romantic. A great place of old to be!
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:59:00 PM
Love the romance in this poem. Reminds me of a book I just read (romance novel).Phyl
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Date: 2/13/2011 7:09:00 AM
Excellent quatrain, James. Outstanding write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Was married in your beautiful country (Edinburgh). We just celebrated our 52nd year together. Be well and best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:52:00 AM
James, now why do I only see this one now? You know how much I enjoy your writes on love in your unique and brilliant way ;) I am still smiling ;-)
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Date: 2/12/2011 3:40:00 PM
Talented write and an enjoyable read.
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