In This Place of Old

On silken sheets, curvaceous she
Alluring eyes are drawn to me
Pert, excited she craves my hand
In loving caress, two in understand

Gently we kiss like Rose petals soft
Whilst exterior storms lash our Highland croft
Candle light flickers across the walls we dance
Postures so sexy, delightful we stance

Passionate sighs thrall, in this place so old
Body temperatures rise deflecting it's cold
We are two become one in thunderous lust
Wanting we are absorbing loving so just

Hands wander tease in adventurous taunt
Kissing aplenty in sexily want
Avenues pursued amidst erogenous groans
Candle light dims as it bows to our moans

Loving sighs implode, together we lie graced
Enriched in we, in this wonderful place
Drifting souls entwined now entering tomorrows dreams
Displaying wonderful colours, like rainbow streams













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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/13/2011 6:02:00 PM
This was quite a write. Just goes to show there's a fire in the furnace while there's snow on the roof. Excellent poem. Vince
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Date: 2/13/2011 3:51:00 PM
Very romantic and sensual, wonderfully written, I love it~~
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:53:00 PM
The ending of this is so romantic. A great place of old to be!
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:59:00 PM
Love the romance in this poem. Reminds me of a book I just read (romance novel).Phyl
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Date: 2/13/2011 7:09:00 AM
Excellent quatrain, James. Outstanding write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Was married in your beautiful country (Edinburgh). We just celebrated our 52nd year together. Be well and best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:52:00 AM
James, now why do I only see this one now? You know how much I enjoy your writes on love in your unique and brilliant way ;) I am still smiling ;-)
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Date: 2/12/2011 3:40:00 PM
Talented write and an enjoyable read.
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