In This Labyrinth:

Space
     
       all born

                crawling through

                                    this labyrinth

                                                         time.


4~7~2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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La France Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Wolf congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Lanterne. I like it a lot.
Wolf Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Thank you so much, Constance /|\
Hoffman Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 7:24 PM
Awesome picture and awesome lanterne WW~G/L in the contest!~Che :)
Wolf Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Cheryl /|\
Leiser Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Succinct and descriptive lanturne. Great presentation :)
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Thank you very much, Laura /|\
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Like the way you fortmatted it WW and the space theme is fab:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:20 PM
Thanks for that, Jan! I think I'll need all the luck there is, Haha /|\
Green Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:02 AM
very cool, the descending pattern of this style and your words are a perfect poetic match.
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:19 PM
Thanks, Chris /|\
Delaney Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 5:31 AM
Like your theme. You have described it perfectly. SuZ
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:19 PM
Thank you very much /|\
Manassian Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:54 AM
Loved it...loved the lay out...really drew me to the meaning of the words. Beautiful
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Thank you, Eileen /|\
White Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 1:26 AM
Wow, cool poem Budgie, and it's like I am looking at it far away in the sky. Is it for the contest?
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:25 AM
That's why I did it, never done one before /|\
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