In This Fall

In this fall
The time retracts slowly

The wind comes from all corners
Makes it long life

Message written on flowers
Fades along this fall

But the wind brings their smells
Spreads away to the entire life

When the slowest motion
Reachs the final line

The old message
Lives in the deepest hearts

Brings peace to this rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 18, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Nur, wonderful imagery. LINDA
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