Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

- In the World of the Dead -

The demons of the night have doubled
                           the unsaved are simply in terrible trouble
                              Moist mist, death, stinky rats and ash
                      Haunting malicious, they come in a blinding flash
                         Shadows of human beings as dark silhouettes
                            you're so close, I can smell your cigarette
                              A living nightmare or just ugly makeup
                      even the cat that slept on a velvet pillow wakes up







                                            27.10.2020
                                    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
                               Copyright © All Rights Reserved

                           8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
                                      2nd place in the contest

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

1 2

Sam Kauffman November 11, 2020 at 12:17 PM Wonderful eerie images, Anne-Lise. Your cigarette reference reminds me of a chandelier my cousins bought in New Orleans. Every so often they would smell cigarette smoke and cheap perfume in the dining room until one day told the "spirit" to go down to the French market where it belonged. Never happened again! Congratulations on your win!

Barry Stebbings November 7, 2020 at 10:30 AM Congratulations on your win with this spooky poem, Anne-Lise. Love the picture. // Barry Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2020 at 10:41 AM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Barry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Stoner Jr November 7, 2020 at 9:25 AM Congratulations on your poem and your placement well deserved. Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2020 at 10:40 AM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 7, 2020 at 1:06 AM Back with my congrats on your win Anne. Enjoy your weekend Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2020 at 10:40 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Tom :) - H.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 6, 2020 at 11:55 AM So very spooky it gives one chills! :0 Yet, it was frightfully thrilling to read. Congratulations on your fine winning entry, Anne-Lise. :=) Evelyn Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 12:07 PM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy November 6, 2020 at 11:54 AM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 12:06 PM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France November 6, 2020 at 10:39 AM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this wonderful poem_ Constance Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 11:17 AM - Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera November 6, 2020 at 2:03 AM Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your great placement!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 2:54 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra November 6, 2020 at 1:01 AM Anne-Lise, congrats on a winning ride. Loved the poem. Love and Hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 2:54 AM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin November 5, 2020 at 1:42 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your scary poem, great imagery! Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 2:55 AM - Many thanks for my place on your winner list, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos November 1, 2020 at 10:02 AM Really scary and creative, I'm sure Tania will love this hectic imagery and spooky tale. You have created a brilliant write, good luck in the contest dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2020 at 11:03 AM - I hope Tania likes it ... thank you for liking it ... thank you for your words and wishes, dear sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf October 29, 2020 at 5:19 PM That dog in the picture sure is brave. The 'guy-demon' scares the bejeebers out of me! ~ Long Gone Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2020 at 2:58 AM - Yes, a brave dog, Gershon ... (I wish it was a cat ... would have suited my poem better :))) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2020 at 9:47 AM I liked this line: you're so close, I can smell your cigarette Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2020 at 2:55 AM - Too close ... Kim :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman October 27, 2020 at 10:29 PM Oh wow, you have wrote this gem so well, Love it. Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2020 at 5:42 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2020 at 5:37 PM oh YES< you did that very nice and spooky, my friend!!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2020 at 5:41 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree October 27, 2020 at 5:17 PM Halloween perfection in this poem, Anne-Lise. ...and a spooky picture to top it off :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2020 at 2:55 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Bayles October 27, 2020 at 3:18 PM I enjoyed the rhyme and the creepy imagery. Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2020 at 5:33 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy October 27, 2020 at 2:57 PM Well done on the creepy setting, Anne-Lise. Janice Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2020 at 2:54 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

W.A. Cholt October 27, 2020 at 2:05 PM There's a nice eerie., scary atmosphere to this poem. Well written. Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2020 at 5:40 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, W.A. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emilia James October 27, 2020 at 1:32 PM This is really spooky and the image is terrifying. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise, Emilia : ) Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2020 at 2:54 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera October 27, 2020 at 1:05 PM This is a wonderful short movie, Anne-Lise!! Music doubles the shadows of terrible sights! This is a top piece in my list!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 1:11 PM - I think I choose your list, Newton :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick October 27, 2020 at 6:45 AM "A living nightmare or just ugly makeup". I like that line. LOL..There are real demons out there who wish to do you harm and lead you the wrong way. Reads like a good contender for the contest. I like the last line also. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 7:15 AM - When day turns to night, Sara ... witchcraft is broken, the dark spirits appear - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 27, 2020 at 6:38 AM Very apt for the season--spookiness skillfully delivered, Anne-Lise--all the best. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 7:10 AM - After dark ... whatever the season, Vijay ... the spirits are released - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One October 27, 2020 at 6:18 AM oh that image is spooky and so is your poem!! Eight very scary lines.. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 7:08 AM - A little bit ... of what the darkness can hide, S.O. :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel October 27, 2020 at 6:10 AM Spooky imagery, Anne-lise, just as required :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 7:05 AM - as ordered ... and delivered, Jo :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

1 2