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“Welcome To The Mystically Beautiful World Of Your Nightmares”: The Superb Digital Art By Stefan Koidl

The demons of the night have doubled the unsaved are simply in terrible trouble Moist mist, death, stinky rats and ash Haunting malicious, they come in a blinding flash Shadows of human beings as dark silhouettes you're so close, I can smell your cigarette A living nightmare or just ugly makeup even the cat that slept on a velvet pillow wakes up 27.10.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved 8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 2nd place in the contest

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:17:00 PM
Wonderful eerie images, Anne-Lise. Your cigarette reference reminds me of a chandelier my cousins bought in New Orleans. Every so often they would smell cigarette smoke and cheap perfume in the dining room until one day told the "spirit" to go down to the French market where it belonged. Never happened again! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/7/2020 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this spooky poem, Anne-Lise. Love the picture. // Barry
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Date: 11/7/2020 10:41:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Barry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2020 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem and your placement well deserved.
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Date: 11/7/2020 10:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2020 1:06:00 AM
Back with my congrats on your win Anne. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Date: 11/7/2020 10:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Tom :) - H.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2020 11:55:00 AM
So very spooky it gives one chills! :0 Yet, it was frightfully thrilling to read. Congratulations on your fine winning entry, Anne-Lise. :=) Evelyn
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Date: 11/6/2020 12:07:00 PM
- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2020 11:54:00 AM
I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice
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Date: 11/6/2020 12:06:00 PM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2020 10:39:00 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this wonderful poem_ Constance
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Date: 11/6/2020 11:17:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2020 2:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your great placement!!
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Date: 11/6/2020 2:54:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2020 1:01:00 AM
Anne-Lise, congrats on a winning ride. Loved the poem. Love and Hugs :)
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Date: 11/6/2020 2:54:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2020 1:42:00 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your scary poem, great imagery!
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Date: 11/6/2020 2:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for my place on your winner list, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/1/2020 10:02:00 AM
Really scary and creative, I'm sure Tania will love this hectic imagery and spooky tale. You have created a brilliant write, good luck in the contest dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/1/2020 11:03:00 AM
- I hope Tania likes it ... thank you for liking it ... thank you for your words and wishes, dear sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2020 5:19:00 PM
That dog in the picture sure is brave. The 'guy-demon' scares the bejeebers out of me! ~ Long Gone
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:58:00 AM
- Yes, a brave dog, Gershon ... (I wish it was a cat ... would have suited my poem better :))) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2020 9:47:00 AM
I liked this line: you're so close, I can smell your cigarette
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:55:00 AM
- Too close ... Kim :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 10:29:00 PM
Oh wow, you have wrote this gem so well, Love it.
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Date: 10/28/2020 5:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 5:37:00 PM
oh YES< you did that very nice and spooky, my friend!!!
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Date: 10/28/2020 5:41:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 5:17:00 PM
Halloween perfection in this poem, Anne-Lise. ...and a spooky picture to top it off :)
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 3:18:00 PM
I enjoyed the rhyme and the creepy imagery.
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Date: 10/28/2020 5:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 2:57:00 PM
Well done on the creepy setting, Anne-Lise. Janice
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:54:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 2:05:00 PM
There's a nice eerie., scary atmosphere to this poem. Well written.
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Date: 10/28/2020 5:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, W.A. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 1:32:00 PM
This is really spooky and the image is terrifying. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise, Emilia : )
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Date: 10/28/2020 2:54:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 1:05:00 PM
This is a wonderful short movie, Anne-Lise!! Music doubles the shadows of terrible sights! This is a top piece in my list!!
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Date: 10/27/2020 1:11:00 PM
- I think I choose your list, Newton :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 6:45:00 AM
"A living nightmare or just ugly makeup". I like that line. LOL..There are real demons out there who wish to do you harm and lead you the wrong way. Reads like a good contender for the contest. I like the last line also. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/27/2020 7:15:00 AM
- When day turns to night, Sara ... witchcraft is broken, the dark spirits appear - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 6:38:00 AM
Very apt for the season--spookiness skillfully delivered, Anne-Lise--all the best.
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Date: 10/27/2020 7:10:00 AM
- After dark ... whatever the season, Vijay ... the spirits are released - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 6:18:00 AM
oh that image is spooky and so is your poem!! Eight very scary lines..
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Date: 10/27/2020 7:08:00 AM
- A little bit ... of what the darkness can hide, S.O. :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2020 6:10:00 AM
Spooky imagery, Anne-lise, just as required :)
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Date: 10/27/2020 7:05:00 AM
- as ordered ... and delivered, Jo :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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