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In the Woods

In the woods the shadows fade as the sun falls away the darkness hides the trees inside the woods come alive. Hear the sounds the owls make as they hunt for their sake. Scattering feet running to hide little mice trying to fly the owls are hungry,its their time to eat and scare the shadows inside. Now the sun is opening up the darkness fades and the light shines the owls sleep and all is safe for the mice are scampering all around pleased to know they are safe and sound. Written by:©Betty Bolden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/26/2013 8:36:00 AM
You have a gift for these soothing images, and reflective poems... Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/26/2013 8:56:00 AM
thank you so much
Date: 2/25/2013 7:10:00 PM
There is a lot of nocturnal activity taking place in any wooded area. You have described it well here. In your last line, just change "their" to either "they're" or "they are".
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/26/2013 7:37:00 AM
i did change the last line..thank you so much.
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/26/2013 7:35:00 AM
thank you so much.
Date: 2/25/2013 3:00:00 PM
I really enjoyed walking through the woods with you!!! Lovely!
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/26/2013 7:35:00 AM
awe thank you
Date: 2/24/2013 11:09:00 PM
dear sweet poetess Betty.. i love your poems so much :) so nice and beautifully written... and thank you for stopping by ..wishing you all the best <3 luv and lights <3 Sk
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/25/2013 5:10:00 AM
thank you so much..i'm so glad you liked the poems.