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In the Wonder

sitting and breathing, I am again in the wonder there are fissures in my night sky I see a skerrick of heaven flaming stones happen through etching minutes on small hours starbursts course onto the Milky Way, snow in space and angel dust in my eye pieces of humanity drift in the iris overawed, breathing stops in the incredible astonishment of existence and the favour of life I respire once more

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Date: 2/10/2014 10:03:00 PM
WOW, I love this. IF you have been writing poems like this. look out, Poetry Soup. This girl is on fire!!!
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Date: 2/10/2014 10:02:00 PM
do you mean Tim R? That is so great he has pushed you back here!! I hope you have a lot of poems stored up now to post!!! Let me see this one now.
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/15/2014 6:30:00 AM
Yes I meant Tim R ;) I have, literally, hundreds of poems to post lol
Date: 2/10/2014 9:45:00 PM
Jayne, this is a beautiful description of wonder...ful! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 2/10/2014 6:29:00 PM
wonderful write Jayne
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Date: 2/10/2014 2:33:00 PM
Nice expression. please visit my posts
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Date: 2/10/2014 12:12:00 PM
Meteors in the night sky are nice sights even though they fall so quickly and can easily be missed even when we blink our eyes. You have described them fancifully well here.
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Date: 2/10/2014 10:21:00 AM
Jayne this is a very nice journey, I like it...David
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