In the Wind

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Written on October 8, 2023

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(Terza Rima Sonnet) Elated illusions laugh at my reason Creations of my mind erase dark shadows I care I search for the joy in each season Beauties this awesome only God can compose His light glistens in the stars, the sun, the moon Who floods our souls with dreams we never oppose Life, at times, seems more like a funny cartoon Than moments we’ve spent bringing our love to life Time’s more crucial than a lazy afternoon Even though we acknowledge a bit of strife Our prayers are answered by stirrings of grace Inspirations some don’t find until midlife Rustling winds with dancing leaves I often face Just when I feel like this life I can’t embrace

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/9/2023 3:15:00 AM

I love your choice of rhymes and also how you’ve expressed here is so beautiful: so true in time prayers do get answered. And theres so much more to life … sending you light always and stay blessed always

Silent One

Date: 10/8/2023 6:29:00 AM

You do this form so well.. so much imagery right from the first line... elated illusions seems a bit dark.. but i can see the light there as God is always by your side my friend..