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October-31-2025

I Do not Know or Other Poetry Contest

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In the Warmth of a Summer Sunset

In the warmth of a summer sunset, I sat idle,
on the sea shore looking at the grey enormity
that heaved and swelled in turn.
Before me was the wild brutality of the sea!
Though at times she is calm and windless,
a smouldering volcano lies beneath her surface.

I sat away from the crowd in a cool square of quiet
inhaling the briny air, enjoying the foam and spray
My mind then was light as that of a child,
that plays on the sea shore, making sand castles.
I watched small boats carrying men.
They were heading towards the Casino moored in the inlet of the sea.
I felt those men were like flies lured by the flame.
They come either to perish or to prosper,
most of them go back with empty wallets!

My eyes stretched far into the horizon.
Swallows were circling beneath tangled clouds.
The tall masts of ships could be seen at a distance
and ever growing waves drifted and strayed
as the fabric of blue got continuously shredded.

For fun I scribbled my name on the sands,
but a wave came crashing against and washed it away
Was it here or there, I had scrawled my signature,
I don’t know. It has vanished leaving no trace.

Suddenly from a child, I grew into a sage.
How transient is man’s life on Earth
How very tiny we are set against the vastness of the sea
In the wide expanse of life, as on a sea shore,
we scribble our names to stay.
Alas! Some unknown hands wipe them away
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Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 12:08 AM
Wow top of the heap on best new 100 poems. . Congratulations, Valsa
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:06 AM
I enjoyed sifting through your thoughts and imagery, leading to the realisation of impermanence, Valsa. Glad I stopped by after a long hiatus. Best regards // paul
Guptar Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations, Valsa, on your top win in this contest with a thoughtful narrative to highlight the transience of human life. So lovely is the last verse :"How transient is man’s life on Earth..... Alas! Some unknown hands wipe them away". Sending you the blessings of light.
Hind Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 8:59 PM
"Alas! Some unknown hands wipe them away" a haunting end. Congrats :)
Poet Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Exquisite reflections linger in the poem, Valsa. The topic you have selected bears significance and relevance, resonating with the currents of thought that shape our understanding. Back with Hearty congratulations on your contest podium.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 11:59 AM
An exceptional rendition traverses throughout, with my compliments, my friend, William.
George Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 7:15 PM
Thanks a lot dear Williams for the great placement given. I feel so delighted by your comment and am humbled.
Jones Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Congrats again for winning this time a trophy!
Jones Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Oh my I thought you won! Well it’s a winner in my eyes!
George Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Dear Karen, thanks a lot. Please know that I am not a trophy winner. Glad I could come closer to the trophy winner.
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Dear lovely Valsa, congratulations on your beautiful winning poem of the day!
Alex Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 7:21 PM
A very grand illustration and scene-depiction. The entire narration gets a spiritual depiction with the unavoidable reality of "we scribble our names to stay. Alas! Some unknown hands wipe them away" - Congratulations!
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Thank you so much dear Chris for your sweet comment and words of appreciation. Have a lovely weekend.
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November 1, 2025 at 5:12 PM
A Beautiful poem Valsa, one becomes entirely immersed in the picture here, so good is your poem, we really are tiny but essential parts of the cosmic fabric, and what a line to finish on, a fave for sure, cheers David
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:56 PM
'We are so tiny, yet an essential part of the cosmic fabric'..... So true dear David. Thanks a lot for your great appreciation of my poem. Feel honored to have got a FAVE from you.
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November 1, 2025 at 4:01 PM
Lovely poetry Valsa, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Thanks a lot dear Beryl for your appreciation and Congratulations. Have a happy weekend.
Gifford Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Hello Valsa, congratulations on winning POTD with your exceptional beautiful poem. An excellent read. Have a wonderful weekend as you celebrate your win, my friend.
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:46 PM
Thank you so much dear Zyrool. So glad you find poem as an 'excellent read'. I feel honored. Wish you too a lovely weekend!
Nicole Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Dearest Valsa, this thought, beyond others that are tucked deeply within your captivating poem remind me of life. ' Before me was the wild brutality of the sea! Though at times she is calm and windless. ' How true it is, that moments are like the sea. Wild and free, yet calm and angelic. Your words hold me close. This is beautiful, tender and powerful, all at the same time. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. Welcome to a new month as well. :) Hugs and blessings, Bandy
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:43 PM
Dear Brandy, your comments are thoughtful, sweetly elaborate and beautiful. I enjoy reading them. Glad you enjoyed the comparison of sea to life. Sweet friend, thanks for your kind words and appreciation.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a wonderful day writing away with your win..............
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:39 PM
Dear Paula, you never fail to appreciate me. Thank you dear friend. Stay blessed. Hugs.
Lawless Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Beautifully written exposing the many secrets of the sea and its wayfarers.
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:37 PM
Dear John, glad you liked my poem. So happy over your comment. Thanks a lot friend.
Gentile Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Valsa, what a beautiful poem and such a contemplative piece! A perfect election for POTD! Congratulations!
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:36 PM
Dear Mike, glad you liked my poem. Thanks a lot for your deep appreciation and congratulations. Wish you a happy Sunday.
Rodgers Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Dear Valsa, Congrats on POTD with a contemplative meditation on transience, framed through the elemental tension between sea and self. I appreciated the way you moved from observational detail into philosophical reflection without losing the sensory immediacy of the scene. Autumn Blessings, Dear Valsa, Daniel
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:33 PM
Your comments are as beautiful as your poems, making me see newer dimensions to my poem. Dear Daniel, I feel fortunate to have association with poets like you. Thank you so much for your support and Congratulations.
Seeker Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Deep, contemplative reflections here, Valsa. As body-mind we are tiny and yet as consciousness we are the entire universe itself, as we discover in meditation. Congratulations on POTD
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Thank you so much dear Seeker friend for your philosophical and enlightening observations and kind comment.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 4:40 AM
well deserved POTD, dear Valsa. You are indeed a sage whose poetry reflects wisdom and insight. Congrats!
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:54 AM
This comment from a poet like you is much treasured. Do l deserve to be a called a sage, I doubt. Still so delighted. Thanks so much dear Sara.
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Back to say congratulations on winning potd!
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:50 AM
Karen, l know, this is your second visit. Thanks dear one for joining in my joy.
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 2:48 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Valsa :) - hugs
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Thanks dear Anne for your second visit and Congratulations. Love and hugs.
Gayagay Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 2:12 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Beautiful painting of sea, sky, shore. And then the emotional and philosophical response at the end.
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:47 AM
Dear Ryan, love your comprehensive comment and thanks a lot for it. Have a great weekend.
Cunningham Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 12:38 AM
An enjoyable read Valsa, congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:45 AM
As ever, you are an emissary bringing me glad tidings. It is from you that l always know of my POTD. So happy you liked my poem. Thanks a lot dear Tom.
Ashley Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 3:04 PM
Dearest Valsa, gifted poet, I absolutely adore this beautiful poem from the inviting title to the grand introspection of the satisfying finale. A big fav for me! If I could fav this poem 1000 times I would.. I feel it’s that impressive and expressive.. it truly moves my imagination, heart and soul that deeply. Your poetic artistry, your use of vivid imagery and vibrant metaphors sparkle in the glow of your exquisite golden ink. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend, your talent shines.. ~Susan
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Dear Susan, you pour on me so much of praise. Compared to what quality your poems possess, l know mine are just mediocre. But your generous words of praise instil in me a desire to strive for excellence. I feel equally flattered and honored by your lovely comment. You have always something nice to say about everyone of your fellow poets. You are so humane, greatly encouraging and immensely gifted. Thank you from the depths of my heart.
Poet Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 10:20 AM
This statement is precisely right. No material object withstands the test of time. Only that which we express in the sphere of the soul is recorded in the annals of eternity. The existence of humanity on this planet is remarkably transient. Our insignificance is evident as we navigate the limitless expanse of the ocean. It is a truth that encompasses comfort. The vastness of the water provides a soothing effect, promoting tranquility through its continuous presence. Engaged with the text, an exploration of recollection, Valsa. I wish you luck in the contest.
George Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Thank you dear friend for your philosophical ruminations on life Yes ,what remains in a state of flux and transience is the beauty we keep inside us.... the quality of our soul. Your learned comments are so much appreciated, dear friend.
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