In the Swamp

In the swamp the raccoons romp
And gators ply the waters.
Wild boars snuff and strut their stuff
And eat their sons and daughters.

Take a ride but stay inside
The boat, both feet and fingers
Or else your zeal provides a meal
(And teeth hurt more than stingers!).

On the boat, when gators float,
The captain calls them closer
With marshmallows tossed at little cost
Or meat that’s raw (much grosser!).

The gators know this little show
Provides a snack quite tasty,
So use their tail to some avail,
Their movements smooth but hasty.

The swamp’s a place I’d hate to face
On any daily basis,
Yet to its beasts it’s never ceased
To be a true oasis.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rigoler Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 6:32 AM
Wish I had written this one, Ilene! Your meters gives this bit of humor a quick read. / Maurice
Wolf Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 9:16 PM
Fourth line of that first stanza --- amazing, albeit so gross. ~ Where's the Alka-Seltzer?
Brotherton Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Ilene, reading about your adventures is more enjoyable than taking the trip myself. Wonderful imagery and rhythm, my friend.
M  Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 2:26 AM
Love the rhythm and flow of this poem ilene and of course the content….swamps are really scary places! Debx
Flood Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 4:04 PM
I love this, Ilene. Its tempo and rhyme are right up my street. Thoroughly enjoyed. Terry
Rolland Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 3:24 PM
good experiences, swamps are hostiles i guess, take care, an interesting poem, changed my mind
Conn Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 3:20 PM
A+
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