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In the Swamp

In the swamp the raccoons romp And gators ply the waters. Wild boars snuff and strut their stuff And eat their sons and daughters. Take a ride but stay inside The boat, both feet and fingers Or else your zeal provides a meal (And teeth hurt more than stingers!). On the boat, when gators float, The captain calls them closer With marshmallows tossed at little cost Or meat that’s raw (much grosser!). The gators know this little show Provides a snack quite tasty, So use their tail to some avail, Their movements smooth but hasty. The swamp’s a place I’d hate to face On any daily basis, Yet to its beasts it’s never ceased To be a true oasis.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 4/7/2025 6:32:00 AM
Wish I had written this one, Ilene! Your meters gives this bit of humor a quick read. / Maurice
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Date: 4/3/2025 9:16:00 PM
Fourth line of that first stanza --- amazing, albeit so gross. ~ Where's the Alka-Seltzer?
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Date: 4/3/2025 11:00:00 AM
Ilene, reading about your adventures is more enjoyable than taking the trip myself. Wonderful imagery and rhythm, my friend.
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Date: 4/3/2025 2:26:00 AM
Love the rhythm and flow of this poem ilene and of course the content….swamps are really scary places! Debx
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Date: 4/2/2025 4:04:00 PM
I love this, Ilene. Its tempo and rhyme are right up my street. Thoroughly enjoyed. Terry
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Date: 4/2/2025 3:24:00 PM
good experiences, swamps are hostiles i guess, take care, an interesting poem, changed my mind
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Date: 4/2/2025 3:20:00 PM
A+
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