In the Stars

even as space dust
we were bound to meet,
amidst the countless stars,
searching and finding, 
in our own
might-have-been 
universe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Nicholsen Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 4:33 AM
lovely write enjoyed reading your work.
Radice Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Hi Peter. Hope all is well and you are making good progress. Sometimes I come across the most romantic and tender of poems that just light up The Soup. Great work. So much expressed in so few words. Sometimes that's all it needs. Cheers - Gary
Rees Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Hi Gary, thanks for this great comment which I appreciate. Walking is still a problem for me and I live in hope that I might eventually get back to “normal”. I must keep on with the exercises, hard as it might be. Good to hear from you Regards Peter.
M  Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 11:45 PM
Extremely beautiful and romantic poem Peter! Re-read!! Debx
Rees Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 2:18 AM
Thanks Deb. Always good to hear from you. Glad you liked my little short but sweet poem.
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