In the Springtime

Hand in hand, we fluttered like two butterflies
among the fragrant flowers of the field
and meandered, singing songs, along a stream.
No agendas to keep to; no schedules to curtail
the pure pleasure that we took
in consuming every lovely hour of our Saturday.

With our picnic lunch, we sat down on a blanket.
Later we lay looking up at clouds.
Transported to the wonderland of our imagination,
we named them fluffy mountain ranges,
bunnies, sheep, and Easter lily petals
until they morphed into lopsided bearded faces,
huge white polar bears and cotton-breathing dragons.

Unexpectedly, the clouds grew dark, and suddenly,
we saw and felt large raindrops splatter on our skin.
We fled our happy field, arriving home - two children,
wet and laughing, just as the spring shower let up.
How were we to know in the springtime of our lives
that the field and the rain from which we fled
I’d one day write about as  metaphors for youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Lovely, Andrea. A very touching poem that resonates with me.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 2:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. Nice read.
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations Andrea! Another amazing poem. I hear you about the time. A great write. I bet a lot of us are right with you on that picnic. :)
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Andrea, this is beautiful and very touching, old or not.
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Good Morning Andrea!Rereading this oldie of you.Did u receive my soupmail which I sent almost 24 hours back?
A   Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Hi Andrea, I hope my contest closes soon... can't wait to see what poem you entered... heheheh... hope to see you stop by my latest blog.. have fun reading... laters... xox~ Linda
Kendrick Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 5:14 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 12:46 AM
I am so happy to see this win for you Andrea, I am sure you know why. I loved it and a BIG Congrats!
Muzzey Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your 2nd place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Guzzi Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Congrad's on Your win, Light & Love
Arowolo Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 3:47 PM
Beautifully written.Lovely presentation,Andrea...Congrats on your superb win,friend...
Hunter Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 2:27 PM
And to say congrats on your win with this one...I remember loving this it when I read it the first time. The ending especially hits me hard...
Babcock Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 10:41 AM
I loved to lay and watch the clouds and pick flowers in spring time. You brought back so many memories with this lovely poem. love phyl
Gorelick Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 10:24 AM
OH, this is number 1 in my book. congrats. BG
Oyewole Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea.
A   Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Good morning Andrea, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA
Bono Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 7:49 AM
ah spring.it needs to make its apperance soon.congrats on a well deserved win.AGAIN.take care
May Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 7:37 AM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
Jones Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 6:52 AM
Wonderful Andrea ....congratulations....
Roberts Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 2:23 AM
Congratulations Andrea .....Seren
Bacha Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Whoa Andrea, as usual so relaxing to read your poem, loved it. Congratulation , see u..LOve Terry xoxoxoxo a 7>>and Fave
Oyewole Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 9:07 AM
Great write Andrea... Best wishes~A.O
Perry Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Another great poem!
Martin Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 1:35 PM
Fragrant and bursting with light and life, Andrea. You conjure up nature so crystal clear and with profound sensitivity. Also, I just happened upon that other poem because I was sifting through your sonnets, but I'm glad you discovered that handy shortcut! ~Jeremy
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Andrea seems like a good time was had...David
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