In the Soft Veil of the Night

The perfection of your lips, they leave me not..
I have traced them a thousand times..
With closed eyes, my empty hands have caressed the curves of your silken shore..
I have lost self within the dark pools of your haunting eyes..
Want fills the vessel of I..
Your scent, that sweet fragrance of desire, filling my mind in fever..
On tongue tip simmers your nectar, fulfilling..
Two breaths as one, our bodies the same..
Wetness and warmth, swallowing stone...
I have drowned within you..
Your soft petals covering..
Drawing forth the rising of man..
Wrapped in your hunger..
I am afloat, in the soft veil of the night....TAH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/19/2018 2:38:00 PM
I am blushing. This is so beautiful, romantic and simply breathtaking. It is filled with the sweet touch of passion. Oh my!! You have created a masterpiece. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/22/2016 10:46:00 PM
TOBEY, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/24/2013 3:36:00 AM
Tobey,--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 10/14/2013 1:18:00 PM
Wow! Raw hunger married to refined longing giving birth vivid memory clothed in primal need. Love it.
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Date: 10/13/2013 12:02:00 PM
A beautifully crafted and stunning piece of art :)
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Date: 10/12/2013 3:49:00 PM
this is simply gorgeous. I am going to fave it!! (it's more grammatical if you say the vessel of "me")
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Date: 10/11/2013 4:59:00 PM
In the soft veil of the night..How passionate and ardently beautiful this.I have to favour this gem..It definitely tickles the thought.Excellent and to my favs-Charma
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