In the Snow

~ Winter swirls upon ice crystal skies, snowflake pirouettes tickle your lashes as we walk hand in hand, rosy red cheeks frame a perfect smile, your eyes twinkle and my heart melts Footprints decorate this path we stroll through sculpted drifts of chilled bliss and scattered birdseed mosaics neath evergreen branches trimmed in white, in a world that glistens Shivered wishes and soft alabaster dreams gather like snow geese frolicking, foraging for food as I lean in to kiss you and your lips taste sweet Quiet whispers float across a frozen lake as we sit upon a wooden bench holding each other tightly, not for warmth, but for love, which we share on this cold December day. . . in the snow ~
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December 22, 2019 at 10:52 AM
This went to my FAVE list almost immediatly.
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December 23, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Thank you so much Caren for your comment and the fave.
Sands Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 9:25 AM
You have written a beautiful poem, Chris. I love to see the snow filled scenery and this shows the comfort of sharing it all with another :)
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December 23, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your kindness.
Na Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Nice poem Chris. You spelled out a winter bliss of feelings.
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December 20, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thank you Greg
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December 20, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Another masterpiece Chris - 'through sculpted drifts and chilled bliss' is just excellent. Best wishes...Ron :)
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December 20, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Bauer Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 12:01 PM
A beautiful poem to warm the heart on a cold winter day! This is lovely, Chris...
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December 20, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Ilene. Your kindness is a gift to me.
Lane Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Such lines could cause the snow to melt.
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December 20, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Lin. I am happy you think so and enjoyed this one so much.
Wanter Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 10:51 AM
There's always a kiss in your poems - I like that!!!
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December 20, 2019 at 12:11 PM
I know, I kind of like kissing. :) Thanks so very much my friend.
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December 20, 2019 at 10:47 AM
sigh...i was transported to this scene your words have painted so magically...like a bird watching from a distance this beauty unfolding.. i found myself wishing for snow knowing that when it comes i will look for the magic falling all around me.. such a beautiful poem cascading from your heart Chris....i love this... stay blessed... hugs
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December 20, 2019 at 12:10 PM
Wow, your comment is more beautiful than any poem I could write. Thank you so very much my friend, your kindness always touches my heart.
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