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In the Snow

~ Winter swirls upon ice crystal skies, snowflake pirouettes tickle your lashes as we walk hand in hand, rosy red cheeks frame a perfect smile, your eyes twinkle and my heart melts Footprints decorate this path we stroll through sculpted drifts of chilled bliss and scattered birdseed mosaics neath evergreen branches trimmed in white, in a world that glistens Shivered wishes and soft alabaster dreams gather like snow geese frolicking, foraging for food as I lean in to kiss you and your lips taste sweet Quiet whispers float across a frozen lake as we sit upon a wooden bench holding each other tightly, not for warmth, but for love, which we share on this cold December day. . . in the snow ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/22/2019 10:52:00 AM
This went to my FAVE list almost immediatly.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren for your comment and the fave.
Date: 12/22/2019 9:25:00 AM
You have written a beautiful poem, Chris. I love to see the snow filled scenery and this shows the comfort of sharing it all with another :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 12/20/2019 2:28:00 PM
Nice poem Chris. You spelled out a winter bliss of feelings.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Greg
Date: 12/20/2019 2:02:00 PM
Another masterpiece Chris - 'through sculpted drifts and chilled bliss' is just excellent. Best wishes...Ron :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 12/20/2019 12:01:00 PM
A beautiful poem to warm the heart on a cold winter day! This is lovely, Chris...
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. Your kindness is a gift to me.
Date: 12/20/2019 11:55:00 AM
Such lines could cause the snow to melt.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Lin. I am happy you think so and enjoyed this one so much.
Date: 12/20/2019 10:51:00 AM
There's always a kiss in your poems - I like that!!!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 12:11:00 PM
I know, I kind of like kissing. :) Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 12/20/2019 10:47:00 AM
sigh...i was transported to this scene your words have painted so magically...like a bird watching from a distance this beauty unfolding.. i found myself wishing for snow knowing that when it comes i will look for the magic falling all around me.. such a beautiful poem cascading from your heart Chris....i love this... stay blessed... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 12:10:00 PM
Wow, your comment is more beautiful than any poem I could write. Thank you so very much my friend, your kindness always touches my heart.

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