Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Couplet

In the Silent Night

In the silence of the night,
        When passion goes all alight,

          Whispering shadows tiptoe
       Through the greens of mistletoe

           To tell me of my past life.
         I’m held till dawn, in a strife.


7 syllables per lines, 42 syllables in all
Rhyme scheme: aa bb cc
Date:13/06/16
For Night Silence contest.
3rd prize, Glory

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Louis Borgo June 27, 2016 at 5:09 PM Great poem, Louis. Sunita U.D Palawon June 27, 2016 at 10:02 PM Thanks for the nice words...:)

Poet Destroyer A June 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM OMG.... how could it not place. Awesome ...Linda Sunita U.D Palawon June 27, 2016 at 8:27 AM Thanks Linda...I read the poems of those placed in the contest. They are fabulous. I'm blessed to be able to write among poets like you all, through this site. :)

Pashang Salehi June 21, 2016 at 11:32 PM Very cute.... Sunita U.D Palawon June 23, 2016 at 11:33 AM Thanks for the nice words! :D

Seren Roberts June 15, 2016 at 12:28 AM congratulations Sunita....Seren Sunita U.D Palawon June 15, 2016 at 8:07 AM Thanks Seren.

Sunita U.D Palawon June 14, 2016 at 9:33 AM Congrats to all the winners of the contest and thanks to all the juries.

Teddy Kimathi June 14, 2016 at 3:56 AM I love the way you beautifully dyed mystery and romance naturally into your poem.... Congrats Sunita, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-) Sunita U.D Palawon June 14, 2016 at 9:27 AM Thanks a lot for the constructive words. I'm overwhelmed it was appreciated. I wrote it as soon as i saw the contest (after a little deception on missing the "Fireworks for me" con.)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores June 13, 2016 at 8:21 PM Congratulations Sunita on the placement of the contest Sunita U.D Palawon June 14, 2016 at 9:25 AM Thanks a lot Nayda. I don't believe it. This makes me love to write poems even more. I loved the theme you proposed at first sight.Thanks to all the judges! :D

Lenny Gazbowski June 13, 2016 at 1:28 PM Lovely write Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon June 13, 2016 at 1:44 PM Thanks so much. I so glad you like it! :D