Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

In the Shadows of Your Sultry Breath

Wrap me in the shadows of your sultry breath,  Oh !  night Divine 
glide me through your hazy path where moonstruck I will 
gaze upon your silvery moon and swoon ;  
Take me to new heights of heaven, Oh! night Divine 
cloth me with shivers, send me rivulets of light down my spine   
Blaze me like you do the stars then ink me, for all that I am. 
before the shadows of your Sacred Night.
Oh ! night Divine...
Swathe me like an opulent ghost in your path, Oh! night Divine  
Though  I be flesh and bone this opaque soul is thirsty for a somber view   
so take me to the edge of your shadow, for I'm a firefly in motion 
beneath your shadowed parapet, I'm an evening primrose willing to die,  
Oh! night Divine, ...Oh! night Divine,  
won't you be mine.

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Karen Jones September 29, 2023 at 5:12 AM Favorite lines are the ending thoughts. Congratulations on a win.

Regina Mcintosh September 24, 2023 at 12:36 AM Lovely writing. Congrats and God bless you, much love, Gina Mystic Rose Rose September 24, 2023 at 4:44 AM Thank you Regina, I'm honored that you loved it, Blessings.

Victor Buhagiar September 21, 2023 at 2:30 AM You have achieved a great step in the ladder of poetry. So romantic a poem. Climb up. my fiend. Hugs. Mystic Rose Rose September 24, 2023 at 4:45 AM Thank you Victor glad you enjoyed it

Joseph P. DiMino September 20, 2023 at 7:41 AM Humanly romantic while heavenly -- lofty intermingling, blissful compromise between body and soul longing for divine transfiguration. The Moonbeams and Stardust of poetic dreamers. I can relate. A joy to read. Mystic Rose Rose September 24, 2023 at 4:45 AM Thank you for reading and commenting Joe ;)