In the Shadows of Reality

He towers as tall as the tallest tree,
wide as the lateral branches extend,
black eyes from unplumbed depth of shifting sea. 
His breath, fire behind clouds strength to suspend 
or expel like a dragon's reservoir.
He has saved from centuries in his heart
the sounds, smells, and sights of a brittle star,
burning red flames, hot, and fierce from the start.

Souls evaporated in silent scorn.
A sorrow severing they're only cord,
it'd crumbled into dust the years stillborn.
They had fallen apart, all shame ignored.

A seve breath beneath the vault of heaven,
adoration would have to be given.

3/20/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 7:55 PM
An exceptional sonnet Eve of intense emotion and intriguing imagery. Well done!
Gupta Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Very well written, Eve ... Rich poetic figures in the first eight lines ... Great ...
One Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 6:25 AM
A excellent sonnet Eve..
Blackburn Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:21 AM
WOW this is deep and meaningful. Great flow and very expressive.
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