thriveni c mysore Poet Free verse

In The Shadow of Sunlight

Quote: When earth’s one half faces the sun, the other half goes to restful sleep – Anonymous
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With tilted axis
And elliptical orbit
Earth shimmies like Prima ballerina

With a graceful pirouette
She faces the Sun’s heat
Smooths out glare on her feet

At night she parties
Filling veins of her green
With stimulating goodness sap

Moon, the proud practice partner
Strenthens her seasonal jumps
Allows her to Celebrate

Appreciative Sun shines
More on the partner
To see well the glow on ballerina

Unmindful of Newton’s theories
Lush lives thrives on this duet
In the shadow of sunlight

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Karen Jones August 27, 2024 at 5:10 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poem placing! thriveni c mysore August 27, 2024 at 9:36 PM thank you dear poet, I am glad you liked it. thank you for the kind pleasant words. Blessings & cheers.

Karen Croft August 25, 2024 at 6:40 PM Congratulations on your placement! thriveni c mysore August 25, 2024 at 7:02 PM thank you for the kind visit dear poet. I feel happy when I see your words on my page. thank you. Blessings & cheers.

Paula Goldsmith August 23, 2024 at 12:57 PM Congratulations on your win. What a great write/story. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away........... thriveni c mysore August 23, 2024 at 10:02 PM you are kind, you are so cheerful in disposition dear poet. I am grateful for your blessings and words. thank you.

Edward Ibeh August 22, 2024 at 4:43 AM Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing piece, Thriveni:--) Thoroughly enjoyed. thriveni c mysore August 22, 2024 at 5:22 AM Thank you very much for this kind message and for your precious time and pleasant visit dear poet. thank you.

David Crandall August 12, 2024 at 7:44 AM Hmm, science, poetry, and ballet weave together to show the weaving of the sun's, earth's, and moon's orbits. thriveni c mysore August 13, 2024 at 5:28 AM your visit brings me joy dear poet. yeah weaving with strange RBG colors, so different I mean, am happy you noticed the threads. I am grateful for your visit dear poet friend, thank you.

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2024 at 9:41 PM gloriously penned...much enjoyed with winning wishes! thriveni c mysore August 12, 2024 at 2:22 AM dear poet friend, your visit brings me joy. thank you for the wishes.Cheers.

Mystic Rose Rose August 11, 2024 at 4:12 AM Many things can thrive in the shadows of sunlight including a poet with great poetry to share, thank you for this, :) thriveni c mysore August 11, 2024 at 4:51 AM thank you dear poet, your visit brings me joy. I am grateful for your pleasant words. thank you. Cheers.