In the Shade - Contest

There is a place deep inside
Where pain and suffering reside

Visions live happily within
Seeking a life without pain and sin

Musical sounds help salve his pain
Till the magical day he is well again

Unfortunately he has to rest in bed
To help cure the sickness in his head

Until that day his tolerance fades
Sunny smiles are left in the shade.



Poems  name is   :   Enferma  en la Cabeza 

Contest name :  Reinvent, Revamp Reimagine


Penned October 15th 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/20/2013 11:55:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem!
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Date: 10/19/2013 8:09:00 PM
Nice to have someone who cares waiting for you to get well. The poem is you.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/20/2013 1:03:00 AM
Hi the original poem was written by another souper,i just re-wrote it as per the contest......Seren
Date: 10/18/2013 7:33:00 PM
This moves one to think how difficult the road to recovery can be, be it physical, or of the mind. Either way.....it takes care, patience and true compassion....... what a wonderful and caring poem this is. Good luck in the contest, Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2013 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Carrie ....Seren
Date: 10/16/2013 7:02:00 AM
This is a tremendous write my friend! I just had to write a comment on this poem, it is such a wonderful poem Seren! You have impressed me with your talents with this amazing piece, I really enjoyed reading this spectacular poem! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2013 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Russell ....Seren
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