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In the Sea of Life

Whispers of Light color the Night in lifeless hues Musical Notes arrayed in soft Quotes for a muse Filling up Lives with captivating Archives in cues For moments of Bliss, feels like a Kiss to bemuse Gentle Insights soften our Sights with pure truth Creating a Peace that will never Decrease its ruth Embracing the Heart from the very Start of our youth Echoing Hopes, finding moral who Copes with uncouth From the Darkness comes a Starkness that sighs Words within a Poem, so you Show him who tries With passions Alive, burning to Strive so they rise Above the Pains life sometimes Gains before one dies Faith makes one Wise in another’s Eyes detect grace That blinds the Soul who is Whole and cannot face The past that Casts a bitter shadow that Lasts to chase Black thoughts Around and finally Abound in this place Loving feelings Abide deep Inside the one who feels Alive with Compassion that leaves you Ashen from appeals To be Appraised by those Amazed that love like this seals The heart with Joy which will Destroy any corrupt ideals In Rhymes Sublime Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May November 1, 2020
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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Hello Regina, A great poem.Enjoy your day my friend.
Kauffman Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 10:00 AM
You had me at "whispers of light" - great opening line. Everything else in this lovely poem of your faithful heart flows from that vibrant, intriguing image. Sending you congratulations and a high five dear friend along with harvest blessings and a hug!
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Whoa!! What a great winner. Congrats. Sara
Logan Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Congrats for a super win...monrhyme stanzas. Impressive, Regina.
Proxenos Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 11:01 AM
Gina, perfectly beautiful, you deserve your fine win - congratulations my dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Fowler Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Nice Gina. A lovely trip :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
May Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Beautiful write Regina, Congrats on your win..
Michael Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations Regina McIntosh on POTD...Well done
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful write. Your sailor sign is so true. Love your line, "The heart with Joy which will Destroy any corrupt ideals." Enjoy your win and day....................
Downing  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Fantastic, Regina, and a big congrats on POTD :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations on POTD Wow! Great write.
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:17 AM
- An amazing poem, Gina ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... (sorry a little late) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 10:16 PM
Sublime rhymes makes this a wonderful poem. Congratulations for the POTD. ~~
Nicole Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:16 PM
In life, there are trials and sometimes the path is uneven. Place your Trust in God. He will guide you safely through them. Congratulations Regina, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:31 PM
You have superb rhyming and internal rhyming in this amazing piece Gina. Wonderful work! It is so nice to see it honored with POTD! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Koplin Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Wonderfully written! Congratulations on POTD!!
Kauffman Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Gina, congratulations on your POTD! I am just thrilled to see your poem as a POTD my dear friend! Your writing so beautifully expresses your deep and profound faith. Sending you a harvest of blessings
James Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Regina, Brilliant piece and very well written, Emilia : )
Watt Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Gina, big congrats on your POTD today, my dear friend! Love all your amazing end rhymes and internal rhymes, not to mention the heart and soul of your message. Enjoy the honor, and have a great day ~ John
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 8:49 AM
I commented on this earlier but the comment has now gone, I mentioned soupmailing you and know you received that message - how bizare, many congrats on your POTD hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Beautifully written Gina, with such depth of expression. Congratulations on POTD. {} Linda
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Does not surprise me that this is POTD... Brilliant poem, congrats..
La France Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:22 AM
Gina, oh such a beautiful poem, I love it, and a big congratulations on receiving POTD, enjoy the honor _Constance
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Regina, with this inspiring write. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:23 AM
WoW! Regina, You have penned such a well written piece. I found it to be inspirational, uplifting, and encouraging. Your rhymes and content were top notch. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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