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In the New Dawn

as the daylight grew a crocus pastel hue winter greys to blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2010 11:26:00 AM
Great spring Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2010 11:22:00 AM
1st week-end of the Triple-Crown , due , so it must be Spring , Brian .....
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Date: 2/4/2010 9:37:00 AM
Beautiful....I have a few crocus popping up...they haven't bloomed yet...but hopefully soon! Blue on the horizon!
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Date: 2/4/2010 5:14:00 AM
Descriptive and visual Brian.. beautiful Haiku... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry ... much appreciated.. luv.. LInda-Marie
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