In the New

Starting new
 twenty two
 hopeful too
 staying true
 through and through

 Things take flight
 in our plight
 it's alright
 guiding light
 dawn shines bright

 1-1-2022
 Mini Monoverse

new yearmonorhyme

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Jennifer Proxenos

January 29, 2022 at 1:50 PM

I like this trendy vibe in this write Joseph , Hope 2022 brings all your dreams to fruition. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Deb M

January 14, 2022 at 6:40 PM

Hi Joseph….a catchy, positive and uplifting poem….good way to start the new year! Debx

Anisha Dutta

January 13, 2022 at 11:26 PM

Nice rhythm Trying for your Contest Have a good day

Connie Marcum Wong

January 12, 2022 at 6:12 AM

I enjoyed the positive way this ended Joseph. I read this and know I left a comment but don’t see it here. This happens often. Blessings xxoo

Natasha L Scragg

January 9, 2022 at 11:44 AM

This is cool. It's one of those forms that sounds easy but sticking to three syllables is a fun challenge. Will have a go. :-D

Brandee Augustus

January 6, 2022 at 4:11 AM

I was just checking this for form; but, it's a really nice poem. Staying true to who we truly are down to our spirit is the only resolution we need. A lovely poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 3, 2022 at 7:44 AM

- Lovely verse, Joseph :) - Happy new year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

January 3, 2022 at 12:20 PM

thank you Anne, Happy New Year, Hugs

Beata Agustin

January 3, 2022 at 2:07 AM

Thanks for sharing this. The message and the form are both delightful and delighting... exemplifying what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. A blissful New year to you and your loved ones. God bless you.

Joseph May

January 3, 2022 at 12:19 PM

Thank you Beata, Blessings to you and your family, Happy New Year!

Valsa George

January 2, 2022 at 9:14 PM

This is lovely ! I wish I could write something similar and take part in the contest!

Joseph May

January 3, 2022 at 12:18 PM

Thank you Valsa, I know you can write a poem for the contest.

Brandy Nicole

January 2, 2022 at 7:16 PM

Yes, I'm hopeful too. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. Happy New Year, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May

January 3, 2022 at 12:17 PM

Thank you Brandy, Happy New Year!, Hugs