In the New

Starting new twenty two hopeful too staying true through and through Things take flight in our plight it's alright guiding light dawn shines bright 1-1-2022 Mini Monoverse

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/29/2022 1:50:00 PM

I like this trendy vibe in this write Joseph , Hope 2022 brings all your dreams to fruition. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Deb M

Date: 1/14/2022 6:40:00 PM

Hi Joseph….a catchy, positive and uplifting poem….good way to start the new year! Debx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/13/2022 11:26:00 PM

Nice rhythm Trying for your Contest Have a good day

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/12/2022 6:12:00 AM

I enjoyed the positive way this ended Joseph. I read this and know I left a comment but don’t see it here. This happens often. Blessings xxoo

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 1/9/2022 11:44:00 AM

This is cool. It's one of those forms that sounds easy but sticking to three syllables is a fun challenge. Will have a go. :-D

Brandee Augustus

Date: 1/6/2022 4:11:00 AM

I was just checking this for form; but, it's a really nice poem. Staying true to who we truly are down to our spirit is the only resolution we need. A lovely poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2022 7:44:00 AM

- Lovely verse, Joseph :) - Happy new year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 1/3/2022 12:20:00 PM

thank you Anne, Happy New Year, Hugs

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/3/2022 2:07:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. The message and the form are both delightful and delighting... exemplifying what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. A blissful New year to you and your loved ones. God bless you.

Joseph May
Date: 1/3/2022 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Beata, Blessings to you and your family, Happy New Year!

Valsa George

Date: 1/2/2022 9:14:00 PM

This is lovely ! I wish I could write something similar and take part in the contest!

Joseph May
Date: 1/3/2022 12:18:00 PM

Thank you Valsa, I know you can write a poem for the contest.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/2/2022 7:16:00 PM

Yes, I'm hopeful too. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. Happy New Year, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 1/3/2022 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Brandy, Happy New Year!, Hugs