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in the nature

I am stressed, The grey heron is worried, In turn it flies away, Shriek. The frogs are eating, So there’s life In the muddy, green pond. Je suis stressé, Le héron gris est inquiet, à son tour il s’envole, Pousse des cris rauques. Les grenouilles croassent, Il y a donc de la vie Dans la mare boueuse et verte.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/15/2024 5:46:00 PM

This is very nice Yann. A poignant view. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/15/2024 6:01:00 AM

Lots going on. Contemplation over the stressed, worried heron, the shriek (I can see him taking off).

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/15/2024 12:25:00 AM

thank you so much for stopping by, valsa, have a nice week end

Valsa George

Date: 6/14/2024 8:29:00 PM

I see the green pond, the frogs and the heron.... ! This is a usual sight! Well written dear Yaan.

Yann Rolland
Date: 6/15/2024 12:26:00 AM

thank you so much for stopping by, valsa, have a nice week end

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2024 1:17:00 PM

Cool one, Yann. Love the contrast.

Yann Rolland
Date: 6/13/2024 7:00:00 PM

thank you so much, naure is more cool i think

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/13/2024 10:57:00 AM

i love the contrast in the two verses, yann. well done...

Yann Rolland
Date: 6/13/2024 7:01:00 PM

thanks ulene for stopping by and the comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/13/2024 2:22:00 AM

Yes, the muddy green pond is full of life even if it is not the kind of life we would want but it reads like it is a nice habitat for some species of nature. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Yann Rolland
Date: 6/13/2024 7:02:00 PM

thank you so much sara, i wouldn't live either in a dirty pond, frogs can do that good for them