I Am Anaya Poet Monoku

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Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Charles Messina

First Place 

In the Mood

                                   coast to coast love songs  
                                   rendezvous, dedications~ 
                                       laughing together   


	                 I’ve lusted your spaghetti Bolognese 
                         with you, fine port, and a soft ocean breeze
                         Will I ever leave?  Never!         
                         I will love you forever!
                         But all I ask now is pour more wine please


          together thirteen years and like always ~ you’ll forget the garlic toast

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Robert Gorelick June 3, 2022 at 7:20 AM Fine and flowing poetry, well done Anaya. Robert I Am Anaya August 16, 2023 at 6:29 PM Belated thank you, Robert!

Charles Messina March 16, 2022 at 6:27 PM Hi Anaya, just getting back to you to Congratulate you on your win in my contest. I loved everything about this... hubby should never forget the garlic toast .. A MUST! (lol) Hugs Charlie I Am Anaya March 17, 2022 at 10:56 AM I enjoyed your contest, Charlie; too much fun. Thank you for the top placement and YES, a must to garlic bread! Very nice to have you back. Hugs back atcha!

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2022 at 4:10 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara I Am Anaya March 17, 2022 at 2:38 PM Thank you, Sara, I appreciate it! : )

Valsa George March 11, 2022 at 8:20 AM Anaya, back to your poem with hearty Congratulations on your first place win ! I Am Anaya March 11, 2022 at 11:04 AM thank you, Valsa.

Jeff Kyser March 11, 2022 at 5:10 AM very nice! "the garlic toast" much better than "to close the lid", lol I Am Anaya March 11, 2022 at 7:26 AM Yes, mmm, thank you, Jeff

Christuraj Alex March 11, 2022 at 4:40 AM "pour more wine please" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations! I Am Anaya March 11, 2022 at 7:25 AM You got it Christuraj and you get it. Thank you!

Valsa George February 8, 2022 at 8:03 PM Sing more of love....A beautiful entry for the contest dear Anaya.... ! Best of luck. I Am Anaya February 9, 2022 at 2:20 PM thank you so much, Valsa!

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2022 at 5:05 PM this is so cool and a joy to read. Is it an Italiano man or just the country?? maybe it's both that you adore. I Am Anaya February 9, 2022 at 2:20 PM A fantasy, I'd say about 60% true. ;)

Gershon Wolf February 8, 2022 at 12:25 PM Now I know not to get you spaghetti-Bolognese-flavored wine for Valentine's Day, Anaya! ~ Port and Starboard, Gershon I Am Anaya February 8, 2022 at 12:30 PM Smiling!

Harry Horsman February 7, 2022 at 11:43 PM Excellent poetry, good luck with this contest entry. Stay Safe. Harry. I Am Anaya February 8, 2022 at 8:13 AM I am honored, Thank you Harry. And you taught me a great lesson today! Thank you for that. Harry Horsman February 7, 2022 at 11:44 PM In one of your comments on my poetry, you asked to check the date, Just to say, we do it different out side of the USA.