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Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest

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Contest Winner MedalFirst Place 

                                   coast to coast love songs  
                                   rendezvous, dedications~ 
                                       laughing together   


	                 I’ve lusted your spaghetti Bolognese 
                         with you, fine port, and a soft ocean breeze
                         Will I ever leave?  Never!         
                         I will love you forever!
                         But all I ask now is pour more wine please


          together thirteen years and like always ~ you’ll forget the garlic toast

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Date: 6/3/2022 7:20:00 AM
Fine and flowing poetry, well done Anaya. Robert
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/16/2023 6:29:00 PM
Belated thank you, Robert!
Date: 3/16/2022 6:27:00 PM
Hi Anaya, just getting back to you to Congratulate you on your win in my contest. I loved everything about this... hubby should never forget the garlic toast .. A MUST! (lol) Hugs Charlie
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I Am Anaya
Date: 3/17/2022 10:56:00 AM
I enjoyed your contest, Charlie; too much fun. Thank you for the top placement and YES, a must to garlic bread! Very nice to have you back. Hugs back atcha!
Date: 3/13/2022 4:10:00 AM
I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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I Am Anaya
Date: 3/17/2022 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, I appreciate it! : )
Date: 3/11/2022 8:20:00 AM
Anaya, back to your poem with hearty Congratulations on your first place win !
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I Am Anaya
Date: 3/11/2022 11:04:00 AM
thank you, Valsa.
Date: 3/11/2022 5:10:00 AM
very nice! "the garlic toast" much better than "to close the lid", lol
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I Am Anaya
Date: 3/11/2022 7:26:00 AM
Yes, mmm, thank you, Jeff
Date: 3/11/2022 4:40:00 AM
"pour more wine please" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 3/11/2022 7:25:00 AM
You got it Christuraj and you get it. Thank you!
Date: 2/8/2022 8:03:00 PM
Sing more of love....A beautiful entry for the contest dear Anaya.... ! Best of luck.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/9/2022 2:20:00 PM
thank you so much, Valsa!
Date: 2/8/2022 5:05:00 PM
this is so cool and a joy to read. Is it an Italiano man or just the country?? maybe it's both that you adore.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/9/2022 2:20:00 PM
A fantasy, I'd say about 60% true. ;)
Date: 2/8/2022 12:25:00 PM
Now I know not to get you spaghetti-Bolognese-flavored wine for Valentine's Day, Anaya! ~ Port and Starboard, Gershon
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/8/2022 12:30:00 PM
Smiling!
Date: 2/7/2022 11:43:00 PM
Excellent poetry, good luck with this contest entry. Stay Safe. Harry.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/8/2022 8:13:00 AM
I am honored, Thank you Harry. And you taught me a great lesson today! Thank you for that.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 2/7/2022 11:44:00 PM
In one of your comments on my poetry, you asked to check the date, Just to say, we do it different out side of the USA.
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