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Laura was couer-shaped, the way her knees blossomed out, magenta, genie-like sheer. She blew kisses like cultivated fleurs de jour. Her drooping necklace, a frolic of felicity. Laura’s bodysuit pink — a glittering off the shoulder bonbon, holding perfect ample and youthful bosoms. Sam was blond, a sunny-yellow brooding type. As Laura faced West, He faced East. She leaned against his ebony suit. He wore a bowtie, not one that spins; a scholarly erudite. His cerulean shirt bleeds deep in his heart, blue skies infused into his profound eyes. The third party, a french painter — a poet, a woman’s woman. Her husband gathered the flotsam — driftwood to hang on my wall. Romantic whimsy gets me in the mood. 8/10/2020

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Date: 8/14/2020 11:55:00 PM
From Laura being heart shaped to the brooding type( always mysterious)Vivid yellow fellow and his not one that spins bow tie.The brilliant colours dripped off of the artist brush.The Romance was Whimsical and expressed so vibrantly. My mind boggles on what work of art the husband could have found to hang on the wall from the sea. Made me smile .... A really beaut and clever Verse. Thank you, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2020 5:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Shirley! I’m glad you were able to visualize! <3 Kim
Date: 8/12/2020 12:34:00 AM
Romantic whimsy at her best, Kim. I had to look up flotsam again; I always have to look it up, but it was worth it! Thank you for this one. Your imagery pranced off the page and blew a kiss at me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 4:36:00 AM
Aww...so glad! Hugs!
Date: 8/11/2020 7:51:00 PM
Wow. You lured me right into the drawing-room, where I watched the masterpiece take shape. Lovely conceived and superbly penned, Kim! Light and Joy, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 4:36:00 AM
Light and joy, dear friend! Thank you!
Date: 8/11/2020 3:16:00 PM
Your poem shines, Kim, in the imagery you built in artistic words..mood elevates in company of art.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 4:37:00 AM
It surely does! Thank you! :)
Date: 8/11/2020 12:57:00 PM
You have painted the scene so richly here Kim, the figures leap out of the French painting (I am assuming). Colorful and innocently sensual. A delight! e
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 4:38:00 AM
That’s what I love about art! You must soak in the details and you find something new all the time! Thank you, Eric!
Date: 8/11/2020 12:55:00 PM
You have painted the scene so richly here Kim, the figures leap out of the French painting (I am assuming). Colorful and innocently sensual. A delight! e
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Date: 8/11/2020 12:03:00 PM
The three characters are so wonderfully portrayed, a contrast of characters - each one unique as God meant it to be. Great penning here Kim Very clever. Blessings, and Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 4:40:00 AM
Thank you so much! Love your comment as we are also part of the individuality. Blessings and hugs :)
Date: 8/10/2020 4:14:00 PM
Hello Kim, oh-h- the drift wood st your mood. I like the drift wood it is in many shapes and sizes. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2020 10:54:00 AM
Hello Kim, you are so welcome. hugs Darlene
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thanks so much! Hugs, Darlene!
Date: 8/10/2020 11:09:00 AM
Wow, kisses that are like flowers of the day! You displayed a very nice contrast of characters, Kim. (It's hard to find nicely shaped driftwood, but it would be great to hang some on the wall.) The sea always makes me think of love and eternity. Hugs, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn, for your lovely comment! :)

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