In the Mix

When Slippery Susie starts to stare

Everson Everly is happy to share

Entices Everson yes she can

Does as she likes as she leads her man


So it seems Susie is the one

Mistake it may be or can this be done

Ordinary question where is the answer

Kicking purple heels on the floor a dancer

Enjoying the Music that they create; regardless...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 4:45 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:10 PM
AWESOME POEM...SKAT
Scott Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:43 AM
well very creative love it davidscott
Situation Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 7:55 AM
poetic? YES!
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