In the Midnight Mist

As I was writing this poem, I had my grandson fill in the blank, but Grandma gives… not only did he give me that but the next line which I loved so much I made it my title too. Perhaps, I’m passing down poetry to the next generation.

IN THE MIDNIGHT MIST

some kids don’t hear
morning birds bidding goodbye to the moon
at noon they rise
for their bacon and pancakes
or tacos and burgers
bidding goodbye to the morning sun
all of out synch
pay no attention to the olden days
no rise and shine
no switch on the back side
spoiled and loved and spoiled
hopefully their parents whip them into shape
with their love…no belly aching
after visiting the fortress of solitude
dramatic, yes
that’s what the eight year old calls his room
here in my habitation,
but when his brother is here
he finds aggravation
or vexation from Grandpa
but Grandma gives kisses
in the midnight mist
according to a little birdie
who woke up from his nest

7/1/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/6/2023 2:40:00 PM
Really cute and I'm liking your style!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2023 7:18:00 PM
Thank youso much, Paige! :)
Date: 7/3/2023 12:40:00 PM
So adorable Kim. I loved this. I'm so happy you are blessed with grands. It makes it so much easier to age I think as they are the future.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 2:20:00 PM
Too true! Be blessed, yourself, sweet Nancy! Thank you!
Date: 7/3/2023 12:27:00 PM
- A lovely poem ... you are a wonderful grandmother to your grandchildren, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 2:19:00 PM
Hope so! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/3/2023 9:58:00 AM
Being amid grandkids is a splendid source of inspiration any time of the day. For they say some of the most adorable things with their innocent, yet intelligent demeanor. Lovely poem, Kim. You are blessed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 10:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Yes, grandkids adorable. I am blessed, indeed! Many blessings to you, my friend!
Date: 7/3/2023 9:56:00 AM
So the little birdie is spying on your family. Must sing his melodious song in happiness at what it saw. Exquisite poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 10:24:00 AM
Love that, dear Victor! Hugs ~ Kim Thank you!
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