In the Meadow

Light lit the meadow where she lie
filtering through her yellow hair
I saw her face
in the smile of the winding creek
dancing with water's rush
her eyes opened and she stared back
a pristine premise agape
allowing no feeling to escape
I reached for her hand but she was gone
the wind had taken her place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawrence Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Mesmerizing… beautiful . I was happily captured by your words and images Ts! Susan :)
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 12:41 PM
Hauntingly beautiful TS so good to see you posting again more regularly these days:-) I miss the fun of the old days:-( hugs Jan xx
Poetry Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Thanks Jan
Labyrinth Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Hauntingly cool. Reminds me of this...
Labyrinth Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 4:45 PM
lol...I can see why you'd say I can see why.
Poetry Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 4:02 PM
I can see why ...thanks Modesty
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November 12, 2023 at 12:15 PM
https://youtu.be/lDpnjE1LUvE?si=JuYovCpEx5aJv9m7
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