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In the Meadow

Light lit the meadow where she lie filtering through her yellow hair I saw her face in the smile of the winding creek dancing with water's rush her eyes opened and she stared back a pristine premise agape allowing no feeling to escape I reached for her hand but she was gone the wind had taken her place

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Date: 11/16/2023 8:09:00 AM
Mesmerizing… beautiful . I was happily captured by your words and images Ts! Susan :)
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Date: 11/12/2023 12:41:00 PM
Hauntingly beautiful TS so good to see you posting again more regularly these days:-) I miss the fun of the old days:-( hugs Jan xx
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/12/2023 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 11/12/2023 12:15:00 PM
Hauntingly cool. Reminds me of this...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/12/2023 4:45:00 PM
lol...I can see why you'd say I can see why.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/12/2023 4:02:00 PM
I can see why ...thanks Modesty
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/12/2023 12:15:00 PM
https://youtu.be/lDpnjE1LUvE?si=JuYovCpEx5aJv9m7

Book: Shattered Sighs