In the Hush of Eve

In the hush of a fading twilight eve
Heard the passionate crooning of a dove
Under the eaves, it sat close to her love
What delight, that sound instantly gave

Sudden was the change it could impart
Brought forth a spurt of spontaneous delight
Lifting away all my sadness and regret,
It fell like rain into my lovelorn heart.

The heavens soon turned azure blue
In joy, my heart began to leap
It generated in me emotions too deep
Before me, all beauty came into view.

I saw pearls of bright sheen on trees,
Resting wobbly on the edge of leaves
Felt the scent of opening flowers,
Fanned in bouts of wind and breeze

Watched the evening covering in shrouds
And the day paving way to night
In darkness, fireflies dancing in delight
And the moon riding in the palanquin of clouds

In the open, I sat long like a sculptured figure
Breathing the scent of the perfumed air
Experiencing a new gaiety in profuse measure
My heart brimming with umpteen desire


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A Strand( Dec.28) Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Brian Strand
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........
George Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 8:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula ! Wish you a wonderful New Year!
Leffanta Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 10:20 AM
By George, you did it! Congratulations!
George Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much Rico....:) :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 7:26 PM
I think, Valsa, this will be a winner! The nature is a beautiful sight and then you sit as a sculpture…gorgeous, my friend!
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:24 PM
Thanks a lot Kim for your intuition ! Wish you a blissful New Year of greater creativity !
Romios Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:27 PM
SA lovely penned poems Valsa. So glad you won! Pamagiota
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:28 PM
So glad that you read, write and comment on poems even in your disability! Thanks a lot. May you be able to walk around soon to greet the New year !
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Oh, so lovely, this is going into my favs. Absolute peace, beauty and joy!
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:25 PM
I feel honored BJ. I am happy if I could give you a moment of peace.Thank you so much for your kind words.
Baker Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Back to say congatulations on the win Valsa. Your poem certainly deserved it. Yeah! Bill
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Once more let me express my gratitude! Have a wonderful year ahead !
Baker Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 2:18 PM
Lovely poem, Valsa. I liked the fourth verse best, the imagery and the rhythmic flow of the words. I clearly saw the vision and felt the sensations of the "trees, leaves, flowers and breeze". Have a Happy New Year Valsa, Bill
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:22 PM
Bill.... I too am a fan of your poems ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:51 PM
I know I read this beautiful poem and I know for sure I commented, but my comment has disappeared. Strange. This beauty is a fave for me Valsa. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. I wish you the happiest of New Years my friend. Blessings xxoo
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:20 PM
Sometimes it happens. The code entered must have gone wrong. However you have expressed your appreciation in a very generous way and thanks a lot for the same, dear Connie~~
Boles Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Innermost thoughts shared and expressed fluently. Sinuous Valsa!...ab
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Thank you very much Anselmo.... for your steady interest in my poems !
Buehler Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:29 AM
A beautifully imagined poem, Valsa. The imagery is so vivid, it takes me to the scene of evening delight. Best of wishes for the contest, Evelyn
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December 30, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Ooooh, I'm delighted! Congratulations, my friend. :D Evelyn
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:15 PM
Thanks a lot Evelyn ! Your Best wishes have fetched for me a win !
Deo Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:01 AM
A sure winner, Valsa. It reminded me of the rhythm I feel with Wordsworth's poems. YOU are a skilled writer in English, wow. Happy New Year to you and your's MY SISTER IN JESUS Christ. Anil
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:13 PM
How happy and blessed I am to hear such sweet words Anil... ! My seamless gratitude, dear brother!
Cunningham Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 10:50 AM
You paint a beautiful scene with your words Valsa. Good luck in the contest Tom
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:11 PM
Thank you so much Tom. Your blessing has found fruit ! :) :)
Leffanta Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Still contemplating hushing Eve . . . .
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Do you wish to be like the crooning dove in love's chamber? :) Thanks a lot friend !
Poet Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Valsa, every line has been expertly crafted. Every unhappy soul on this earth should view it and be empowered since it is genuinely remarkable. Overall, excellent metaphors, with words that flow rhythmically. It makes me happy reading your incredible creativity.
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:00 PM
I feel so blessed by your words Lasaad ! Your lovely appraisal of my poem has made me so happy. Thanks a lot!
Horsman Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Just makes me happy reading this, Gem.
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:58 PM
Much gratitude to you harry ! Stay blessed!
Pandit Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:31 AM
Hushed twilight eve, passionate crooning of dove --offer a serene opening for your wonderful poem, Valsa. Great imagery throughout in words that flow in rhythm. Much enjoyed your splendid creativity.
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:57 PM
There are many torch bearers like you before me. I am inspired by your poetry and learning from you . Thanks a lot Vijay.
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December 28, 2021 at 4:03 AM
I think you were born to be a poet from the day of conception dear soul. Every word well penned, May ever forlorn heart on earth read this and suspire, lovely indeed . Take care, blessed you are, xo
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:19 PM
So sweet of you....to say such words. Thanks a lot you fragrant Rose. Until I was bedridden for sometime at the age of 55, I haven't written a single poem. May God bless you dear
Buhagiar Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 11:18 PM
To be lovelorn in such circumstances is dire indeed. But the bright scene so deftly painted a my friend, a great poet, becomes a scene of serene emotions. Best for a win.
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Thanks a lot dear friend, Victor ! I thrive on your encouragement ! May the New year bring a lot of happy tidings to you .
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